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the kid 523 03-28-05 04:54 PM

Before Death Thoughts
 
Nigga, I'm not gonna lie im fuckin scared
Already strapped into the electric chair
Close my eyes, about to die
Good thing its dark; can't see me cryin
Done wrong before, For good im tryin
I swear to God i be damned if im lyin
I swear Lord, if i could turn around i would
Instead of endin my life for good
Erase the alleged homicide
Now, nobody's ever by my side
I guess for my actions, this is my cost
These are my before death thoughts



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fluidmoon 03-28-05 10:04 PM

nice poem man, i was really feeling this, nice vocabulary and topic, i liked how personable your opener was, it made it more about you, keep dropping..1

the kid 523 03-29-05 03:59 PM

yo thanks man... keep feedback goin

the kid 523 03-30-05 09:28 PM

uppin leave the feeedback


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