CA$per vs Dumb-D-Dumb
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-29-05 at 12:31 AM

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Dumb-D-Dumb has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 12:03 AM.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 12:05 AM.

yo yo...

i peeped one of ya battles, and this no contest lyrically/
you think you can win? but...........you just voted for me/
geeze, i don't even know why you bother to even post/
cuz you harmless....like fuckin Casper the friendly ghost/
man why did your mom give birth to you? I should hit her/
Because the hardest thing about you...is the baby in ya picture/
face it dogg...your only wackness is a partner to you/
you dont act tough at all...Stuey looks harder than you/
man I am done, this battle is done, you fuckin' homo/
You won once, never again...wait your win was a no-show.../

His avatar explains a lot...

yo u wanna step to casper,imma lyrical ghoste...
u get fukkin wit me dogg yer rymes ill be toast.....
this aint tha place for u to spit your jokes....
itsa rap battle,u laugh... i get provoked....
to break yer skull,wit these lyrical rymes...
youll be like 50,bout to get poped nine times...
exept you aint that rich,u just a broke ass bitch....
u bout to explode,my lines r like an ignition switch.....
u battled against stanza and u made me laugh....
cause im cleanin u up like tha maintenance staff...
thats about all i need,to take this fight home....
my werdz r like bulletz that grilled yer dome.......

Voted For: CA$per

yo this was a pretty good battle... this is how i saw it..
casper - yo had a good opener a bit of self glorification, but thats good in small doses, your flow was pretty good, had no strays.. i liked ur punches and you had some good lines, and came with a good closer.. you vocab was pretty on point and i liked the humor u had in it.. good verse homie....

dumb - yo, your verse was a lil more simple, your flow wasnt as good and neither were your punches, you had a few good ones, but then lost track, your opener and closer was aiight but i thought that casper got this.. no hate homie its how i saw it....

vote - casper..

uppin for votez yall...................honest votes will be returned

uppin this fuckin battle wake up everyone
cheaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Voted For: CA$per

very sad ass battle bof verse were wack but heres my feedback

casper
yo u wanna step to casper,imma lyrical ghoste...
u get fukkin wit me dogg yer rymes ill be toast.....
this aint tha place for u to spit your jokes....
itsa rap battle,u laugh... i get provoked....
to break yer skull,wit these lyrical rymes...
youll be like 50,bout to get poped nine times...
exept you aint that rich,u just a broke ass bitch....
u bout to explode,my lines r like an ignition switch.....
u battled against stanza and u made me laugh....
cause im cleanin u up like tha maintenance staff...
thats about all i need,to take this fight home....
my werdz r like bulletz that grilled yer dome.......

sum punches
not many good punches
work on lyrics
work on personals structure ok
elevate sum more
5/10

dumb d dumb
i peeped one of ya battles, and this no contest lyrically/
you think you can win? but...........you just voted for me/
geeze, i don't even know why you bother to even post/
cuz you harmless....like fuckin Casper the friendly ghost/
man why did your mom give birth to you? I should hit her/
Because the hardest thing about you...is the baby in ya picture/
face it dogg...your only wackness is a partner to you/
you dont act tough at all...Stuey looks harder than you/
man I am done, this battle is done, you fuckin' homo/
You won once, never again...wait your win was a no-show.../

weak ass verse
barely any punches
too much mom and baby shit......datz gay
work on rhymin
get more personals
structure wuz iight
elevate a hell of a lot more
4/10
NO HATE 2 BOF YALL JUS A WEAK BATTLE

my v/ca$per

Chea Upppin Yalllllllllllllllllllllll Honest Votes Returned

uppin this battle com on yall kno i got this...........

uppin for votes yall honest votes returned.............

Voted For: CA$per

Pretty weak battle Ca$per took this one easily ...

Dumb
Your verse was plain weak, your punchlines werent hitten hard...Personals= None... didnt like that ... Structure was Okay? could have been better next time dont end you lines w/ // because it makes it seem like a pause ..and not a verse that has flow...Feel me?... Overall keep it up .. or not... which everone lol... 5/10

Ca$per
Decent verse... your punchlines were okay some were hitten , some were just weak , structure was okay , same like dumb except you had better flow... Overall decent battle both can elevate alot... try working on personals and harder punchlines ..6.5/10

Overall vote- Ca$per

Voted For: CA$per

well you're both newbies so I won't say "OMG you FUCKing suck" hahaa...but this wasn't a great battle...

well 1st off, you rhymed "you" and "you" that's eXtremely NO-NO...wasn't really feeling any of your punchez, you should've used some wordplay, make it more interesting, your best thing was the "Stuey" reference though...

Ca$per could've come without the "toast" line, it's corny...and obviously your "rhymes" are "lyrical" hah...however, saying that "his battle verse made you laugh" and then saying that you'll "clean him up like a maintenance staff" is what sold this battle in your favor...

shitty battle, but...

VOTE: Ca$per

Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

man why did your mom give birth to you? I should hit her/
Because the hardest thing about you...is the baby in ya picture/

VS

Nothing

Foreal though, this battle was weak, but you 2 are elevating so no harm though, but in my opinion here, Dumb-D-Dumb took this one, just had one good line out of the whole verses, and the structure was aight, CA$ you shit was aight, but most of ur punches were practically stupid & weak though, seriously...try harder next time though...not a hate vote