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Dumb-D-Dumb vs Bonecollector
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Dumb-D-Dumb has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 04:25 PM.
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yo yo...
haha...claimin you reppin' new york...killah queens? Since when did the game involve 14- year old teens? I know you underestimate me...but here is a quick ten ima beat you so bad, you'll hafta change ya name again a 'bone collector'? from you I wouldn't expect as much dogg you wack as shit, the only thing you collectin is rust i wont be just another bone added to his "collection" considering hes only beat the herbs that went against him tryin to make me a victim, but i wont fall to this newbie hunter cause after this, he'll be a bone to be collected...burried six-feet under! |
Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 08:08 PM.
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Why insult yourself? By your username?...
Shyt even your custom title..puts ya account to shame.. Your from my mom huh? So your my brother?... Yet you aint ill like me ...Guess it was only ever other.. Child that would be dope ... Guess you werent one... Because before i even begun,.. You were outdone!.. I aint gotta come hard... Your just another wack emcee... Shyt just another wanna be me... Cuz my rhymed will have you confused and dumb just like ya Avy!... Now watch as i walk away and leave your body dead to rot... |
Voted For: Bonecollector
ok both good verses BONE PUNCHES-7/10 STRUCTURE-10/10 FLOW-6/10 OPENER-8/10 CLOSER-4/10 DUMB..... PUNCHES-6/10 STRUCTURE-8/10 FLOW-6/10 OPENER-9/10 CLOSER-4/10 SO OVER ALL CLOSE BATTLE BUT BONE GETS THIS ONE YO U DROPIN GOOD SHIT FOR A NEWB DUMB U SHOULD HIT UP OUR CREW HOMIE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Bonecollector
uh, this wasn't that great of a battle dumbddumb....only good line was the personal bout his names, all the rest, you just kept repeating 'bone collector" in them, so they came off really weak, your structure and what not was fine, but i think bonecollector had harder punches/personals, but neither had that great of stuff.....both can elevate still BC, opener and second last bar is what got you this, thought they hit bad, but you have to fix up your structure a little, and your last line, i think you forgot one,,,,,,,,this is definately not your best work, and i hope you work on some shit next time v/bone collector.....no hate, this was a weak battle Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
Voted For: Bonecollector
nice battle winner- bonecollector punches-tie multi-none personals-bone metaphors-none finisher-dumb opener-bone Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
whoa! 3 votes in FIVE MINUTES?????
i smell d/r......but w/e...uppin'... |
Voted For: Bonecollector
ok this is whats up.... Flow:tied Strucutre:tied Personals: i think that bone collector had a few in the beginning Punches:Both came hard...but i'm leaning more towards Bonecollector Vocab:ehhh i'd say tie here Multies:none really Overall i'd have to say that bone got it...i mean this was a close battle..but it all came down to the personals and thats what he got you on dumb....seriously..just keep working and elavatin to the both of you..but good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Bonecollector
Bonecollector Why insult yourself? By your username?... Shyt even your custom title..puts ya account to shame.. Good punch off his name/user title...8/10 Your from my mom huh? So your my brother?... Yet you aint ill like me ...Guess it was only ever other.. Eh...didn't really get it to much...5/10 Child that would be dope ... Guess you werent one... Because before i even begun,.. You were outdone!.. Not bad...7/10 I aint gotta come hard... Your just another wack emcee... Shyt just another wanna be me... Cuz my rhymed will have you confused and dumb just like ya Avy!... Kind of Self Glory...but punch on the last line...7/10 Now watch as i walk away and leave your body dead to rot... ....?...2/5 Overall: 29/45 = 64.4% Dumb-D-Dumb haha...claimin you reppin' new york...killah queens? Since when did the game involve 14- year old teens? Hahaha nice opener....8/10 I know you underestimate me...but here is a quick ten ima beat you so bad, you'll hafta change ya name again Nice punch/personal...7/10 a 'bone collector'? from you I wouldn't expect as much dogg you wack as shit, the only thing you collectin is rust Wack punch....4/10 i wont be just another bone added to his "collection" considering hes only beat the herbs that went against him Eh...not to bad...didn't flow that good...6/10 tryin to make me a victim, but i wont fall to this newbie hunter cause after this, he'll be a bone to be collected...burried six-feet under! Six-feet under lines are played man....4/10 Overall: 29/50 = 58% Vote: Bonecollector Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Why insult yourself? By your username?... Shyt even your custom title..puts ya account to shame.. 8...gud opener, nice personal. Your from my mom huh? So your my brother?... Yet you aint ill like me ...Guess it was only ever other.. 6...not really feelin this, but still ok. Child that would be dope ... Guess you werent one... Because before i even begun,.. You were outdone!.. 6...cud be better! I aint gotta come hard... Your just another wack emcee... Shyt just another wanna be me... 5...weakest line so far, its like u aint tryin son! Cuz my rhymed will have you confused and dumb just like ya Avy!... Now watch as i walk away and leave your body dead to rot... 0...didn't rhyme yo......Avy and rot don't rhyme. OVERALL:25/50 haha...claimin you reppin' new york...killah queens? Since when did the game involve 14- year old teens? 5...not really feelin this one. I know you underestimate me...but here is a quick ten ima beat you so bad, you'll hafta change ya name again 4...bleh!! just filler!! a 'bone collector'? from you I wouldn't expect as much dogg you wack as shit, the only thing you collectin is rust 5...ok i guess! i wont be just another bone added to his "collection" considering hes only beat the herbs that went against him 4...kind of filler and played concept. tryin to make me a victim, but i wont fall to this newbie hunter cause after this, he'll be a bone to be collected...burried six-feet under! 6...once again, ok but nuthin special. OVERALL: 24/50 ok close battle. bonecollector u just didnt seem to try here, and the last bar didnt rhyme. luckily ure other punches were a lot better than dumb-d-dumb. Dumb....u were just droppin weak punches with played concepts........i think u need to elevate a lot yo, and bone, u need to come strong instead of not tryin cuz next time u mite get beat. |
lol, i wasnt trying ... :)
Uppin since he got all my damn voted removed |
Voted For: Bonecollector
this was a close ass battle...both of yall came hard but I think I gotta giv it 2 Bonecollector...damn that was hard to vote for |
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