Skriptz vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-31-05 at 05:30 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 05:32 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 05:32 PM.

half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*

*win though sounds like window... meh

just tyrin somethin different

uppin.............................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

one step beyond
half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*

*win though sounds like window... meh

liked ur punches
good lyrical choices
nice personals
iight structure
elevate a lil bit more & u b pretty good
8.5/10

skriptz
You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you

iight punches...not 2 many of em doe
structure was real simple and easy 2 read
lines and lyrics were sort of weak
elevate more
7.5/10
no hate skriptz

v/1stepbeyond

ay yall cud u plz check out my battle vs. thekid523 and showtime
please leave good adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back!

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^why are u always voting on my battles?

im votn on every1 battles
i need battle credits so i vote on ppls battles
ssrry 4 freepostin

p.s like ur sig...tyte as shit

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Skriptz

Haha...no real contest here. Onestep came decent...he's halfway there...but not nearly on Skriptz's level...structure was stretched for OneStep...that threw the flow off...just keep elevatin'...everybody gets better...Skriptz...not the hardest I've seen from you...but hard enough. Dope punches...closer was dope haha...nice work. No hate. Just elevate.

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limited edition... you've got to be kiddin...... he's serious isn't he?

^wha u talkin bout...ur vote was a joke...

uppin

Yes, I'm serious...and if you have anything to say, set it up...biotch.

uppin this shit