I Wish I Could Die
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/xspittymusic.htm

i left feed on Dissin Sprees and on a the omen's song

quality isnt very good.....lyrics werent bad...but your flow was off it seemed like...your vocals seemed too high....and it also seemed like you were reading it off paper...i dunno...i think if it would have flowed better i would have enjoyed listening to this track more...lyrically i didnt think it was bad...yo if you wanna battle me audio for my first battle...thatll be good...cause i kinda wanna find someone who doesnt have great quality like me...my quality sucks..just hit me up and ill set it up.....

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How did I listen to this track?
Headphones or Speakers: I listened through speakers w/subwoofer

1-10 (10 being the highest)
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Flow: (fluidity/complexity/originality): 6


Rhyming: (Multies/complexity/appeal): 6


Lyrics: (Originality/creativity/complexity): 4



Energy: (intensity/focus): 6



Delivery: (Rhythm/creativity/efficiency): 6

50 pts. maximum>>>>>>Your Score:____28*______
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Beat selection: chintzy...not good


The Good: I liked your energy and voice

The bad: track is too short to be of any value...unless ur lyrics were super dope, which they were not


The ugly: hiss in your track...lyrics were forgettable...in fact, I don't even remember them


Final Word: This track was banal and subpar...there were no elements that stuck out, except for the hiss in your track.


Recommendations: Run light hiss redux...take the time to write lyrics for a track that's at least 2 minutes long...work on delivery...Ur not bad actually...I like ur voice and ur flow has potential


*Final Grade:______C_______
A = 50-40
B = 39-30
C = 29-20
D = 10-19
F = 0-9

this shit is ight so peeps dont know to hate on it man

i was gona use this beat.... damn you.. well imma still use it beat is dope... intro is ight, quality isnt that good, flow isnt that gd... its not on beat... lyrics are gd story is gd... maybe its the rong type of song for that beat u might wna use a slower beat overall i dnt really like it sorry man

no prob,im learning in audio now so,thanks for the feed

ya man u wna do a collab sometime? hit me up on aim r3loaded69

iight rtfing.... arright, this isn't too bad, your delivery is o.k, but some of your lines are too long and it fucks up the flow of the song, it was real short, quality was touch and go, i couldn't understand everything you said, i thought you waited too long to start spitting once the beat kicked in, story was pretty consistent, just need some polishing on the skills. keep droppin songees...1

thanks for the feed yall

Lol @ I Wish I Could Die.!!

u got a prob against that lol

o this beat... took me forever to find it, cuz i heard da song like 1 year ago.. lol
kazza stylz...

i may still use it idk..

o jea anywayz,.

quality is bad, static and background

u dont have any confidence, reminds me of deadly vision a lil.. dont ask
flow is off, everything off... lol u need to work alot more, practice it up

thx apreciate it,remind you of deadly vision lol