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the kid 523 vs Elementality
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R Good Luck. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-02-05 at 04:11 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 06:32 PM.
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Elementality has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 07:18 PM.
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"Hi Guys! I'm kid 523, I really enjoy wear'n fubu, and act' O.G. I rhyme monosylabically with shit like knee, tree, and C.D." -This little tykes the real deal. hes so crazy he's on a crew. Too bad you're so square you think be'in sick is havin the flu. His flows a figment of his imagination, like his friend fredrick. Even If this kid had some vision, he'd still need a walking stick. I'm willing to bet that this kids a twelve-year old spoilt little brat. Once hes done posting his shitt, he'll move over to his play mat. Your versus' are cracked, like readin a crackers Auto-Biography. Heres some advice kid: quit rymin and stick to Child-pornography. |
common man drop your shit already....whats taking you all day?
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Elementality, for your own benefit homie just quit
Give yourself three days to drop and your verse is still shit Its absurd, how easily I can kill you with words, leave you full with pressure If i bit your fucking style, id only make it fresher Ill leave you hurt, psycially and emotionally scared drop you from a plane thats the only way u hittin hard My words will open a hole in your throat, make you choke haha, you battlein me? this some early april fools joke? When readin my verse, ill have you scared to read the next line, keep tryin You should battle me when you look out the window and pigs are flyin |
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This was feedback posted for the kid 523
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yo does someone wanna vote on this or what???????????????
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Voted For: Elementality
Lemme break this down... Opener - Element, Kids wasnt evem a punch... Closer - Element, Kids hit himself harder... Punches - Element, Kid was hitting himself... Personals - Neither, didnt see any... Metas - Element, Kid didnt have any... Multies - Element, Kid didnt have any... Vocab - Element, Kids was elementary Structure - Element, Kids was sloppy as hell... Comedy - Element, wtf is Kid doing... As you can see from above it is obvious that Elementality took this one and I know that the polls will show this. The Kid: Learn how to do this shit properly dawg, no hate. Elevate your vocab and make your punches hit your opponent rather than yourself. Self-glorification is wack, dont use it. Also, structure your verse neater so it looks better. And try using personals and multies, they help your verses overall effectivness. Elementality: Your verse was sick. Only areas for improvment I would have to say are first of all use bigger words when using multies and try using personals aka punches that could only be thrown at your opponent rather than anyone. Youve got the structuring, vocab and comedy down...lookin dope. Keep it up and hope to see more of your verses in the future... V/Elementality............ |
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