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LiL DruNkie 08-01-02 01:32 PM

Red Dye
 
Can i hold it back any longer?
the light will reflect n make it shine
you can see deep down its darkness
watch how the red roses grow on the sharp edges
so peaceful,so beautiful...
a place which the ride to there is inscapable when the life is low,
as i lay on that edge,i feel a little pain cos of the fatigue,
and suddenly i see infront of me a kid,playing with his ball,
with his tricycle hitting the road
all this time keep on laughing,n now he stands up
a girl comes and goes,n he cries...
his tears turn red...start soaking his clothes...
the tears form a paddle...he falls on his knees,
theres no halo,he's just a red dye on the street...

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 08-02-02 08:55 AM

This had alot of depth to it ...
had to read ova ... to see tha tru meanin ...

Props & Respect
~1~

LaDy TrInItY 08-02-02 12:23 PM

hmm pretty decent..wait i remember this name!! haha....hmm someones not been too active....but nice drop..much luv..God bless.1...

synickle 08-02-02 03:15 PM

yo dis thing is hott. keep postin!!. much respect. uno


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