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Adrenaline 03-31-05 04:27 PM

Adrenaline vs limited edition
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 05:27 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-31-05 04:28 PM

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 04:28 PM.

Adrenaline 03-31-05 05:02 PM

yo.
u can try,but you'll never be b4 me cuz "im ahead of my time"
and plus this kid's like his birthday.................2 days after mine
kid ur rhymes aint got talent so you should start the "diss missin"
ur more truth than ur name is cuz u only got a "limited edition"
man u must be crazy tryin battle me....please tell me ur kiddin
ur chances of winnin are like ur signature........"one in a million"


had to make an early depart...

System 03-31-05 06:05 PM

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 06:05 PM.

Adrenaline 04-01-05 12:40 PM

I was hoping to win this....but I couldn't spit no further lines due to an early depart.......sorry.....maybe another time...we might have a rematch....

L.E 04-03-05 06:59 PM

A'yo...

Adrenaline...? I'll make ya blood rush until you blowin' up...
Fact is...you would have a better chance if you never posted up...
'Unkown Legend'? Dawg...you just plain fail to astound...
Your losses accumatin faster than your avy is scrollin' down...
Keyed up quick...you PMed me sayin' to drop a quick six...
You be beggin' for wins more than poor kids on Christmas...

Blah quick...

Murdah.txt 04-04-05 12:24 AM

Voted For: Limited Edition

ahahahahaha ok
limited good punches good vocab good structure overall good verse fer a quik six
adrenilin you had ok punches not bad flow kinda hard to follow and yer structure wasnt very good so overall yeah L.E get this one werd

Spektikul 04-04-05 02:56 AM

Voted For: Limited Edition

This battle was pretty terrible...
I never really think 6 lines are enough to get out what you wanna say.
But anyways, both of you kinda used a bit of self-glorification...which in a 6 line battles takes up room and is unnessacary. Adrenaline had the personals, Edition had the punches. Both of you coulda had better structuring, vocab, and use of multies and metas. I wasnt really feelin either verse, not to be a jackass or anything, but both of yall know that neither of your verses are anything to be proud of. However, there must be a winner and I was definatly feelin L.E.'s verse a bit more. Adrenaline, only your 2nd bar is the best you had and not much at that. L.E., you actually threw punches in your 2nd AND 3rd bars...So my vote goes to L.E. for bein more consistant with punches.

BUT ONLY IF YOU RTF IN MY SIGGY...

V/L.E..................

PS - RTF now or Ill remove my vote. No hate, just do it. Peace.

Adrenaline 04-04-05 12:42 PM

how do you remove votes?...blah

uppin....this was terrible...
yo l.e I thought u was gonna cream me but I think I actually won....but the votes not showin that...

I dont think my barz was self glorification...maybe u people didn't get the personals...
blach....

uppin...

Spektikul 04-04-05 03:43 PM

u can try,but you'll never be b4 me cuz "im ahead of my time"
Self-Glorified...
and plus this kid's like his birthday.................2 days after mine
Gay line, no punch...
kid ur rhymes aint got talent so you should start the "diss missin"
Didnt make sense, could have worded it better...
ur more truth than ur name is cuz u only got a "limited edition"
Weak personal attempt...
man u must be crazy tryin battle me....please tell me ur kiddin
Major Self-Glorification...
ur chances of winnin are like ur signature........"one in a million"
Self-Glorification/alright wordplay...

...Just so you know. :thumbup:

L.E 04-11-05 06:06 PM

Uppin' for votes...fuckin' sleepers...............

L.E 04-15-05 10:57 PM

Uppin' for some more votes...fuckin' sleepers.....

FlowIntelligent. 04-19-05 12:46 AM

Voted For: Limited Edition

Adrenaline:

u can try,but you'll never be b4 me cuz "im ahead of my time"
and plus this kid's like his birthday.................2 days after mine
^^ decent personal wack set up 4/10
kid ur rhymes aint got talent so you should start the "diss missin"
ur more truth than ur name is cuz u only got a "limited edition"
^^decent 5/10
man u must be crazy tryin battle me....please tell me ur kiddin
ur chances of winnin are like ur signature........"one in a million"
^^decent 5/10

overall: 14/30 (47%)

L.E:

Adrenaline...? I'll make ya blood rush until you blowin' up...
Fact is...you would have a better chance if you never posted up...
^^decent 4/10
'Unkown Legend'? Dawg...you just plain fail to astound...
Your losses accumatin faster than your avy is scrollin' down...
^^OK personal 6/10
Keyed up quick...you PMed me sayin' to drop a quick six...
You be beggin' for wins more than poor kids on Christmas...
^^ok 5/10

overall: 15/30 (50%)

Vote: Limited Edition

Restricted 05-04-05 03:49 PM

Voted For: Limited Edition

Aight Check It..

Adrenalines Best Line:

u can try,but you'll never be b4 me cuz "im ahead of my time"
and plus this kid's like his birthday.................2 days after mine

Limited Editions Best Line:

'Unkown Legend'? Dawg...you just plain fail to astound...
Your losses accumatin faster than your avy is scrollin' down...

Both of Your Structures Were The Same....I Can Only Base This Battle On Punches and Personals...and Limited Took This Battle With Those Categories.

Vote: Limited Edition

~R~

Mad Dog 05-05-05 06:23 PM

Voted For: Limited Edition

I think that Limited Edition got this battle because i feel that Limited Edition came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Limited Edition got it was effective and was on point Adrenaline you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Limited Edition good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Limited Edition and flow and structure i'll give to Limited Edition.

LE had a good verse nicely laid out good P&P's good rhyming Adrenaline some lines were self-g though lose them you gettin better but you still need work but keep droppin though...battle = 1 sided on this occasion

V/Limited Edition RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed


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