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Origin 04-01-05 01:14 PM

"Verbal Arts"- Origin
 
my verbal arts leave u on the verge of scarred
cause I'm heartless like a deck of cards
with nothing but spades clubs and diamonds
i got 99 problems, and not 1 is rhymin
and i dont like to brag, but im full of myself
so how could i act like anyone else?
so i dont get writers block, im imune to it
i melt it like ice cubes when i spit
and my lyrics are always below the street
im underground, cuz music is first nature to me
and nature calls at least 50 times a week
i got no patience like a doctor with no degree
and you could call me a rapping prostitute
cuz i dont give a fuck unless im gettin money from u
im off the wall like a poster of r.kelly
after the sex tape failed to be burried


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Stanza 04-01-05 01:56 PM

LOL

:roll:

It was A Nice Piece I Feel you Shouldve said alot more Bcuz this Was Like ...... I Tease

But You got potential & talent

Two things a whole lotta ppl lack

So Nice piece 8/10

..:: Stanza ::..

Kawn Flixx 04-01-05 03:05 PM

Hmm...
This was an okay drop...
could have been alot better..
Structure was okay , alittle off towards the middle..
Concept..was good
Wordplay was okay...
overall keep it up.. you could have made it longer though...
thought it was alittle to short for me...
elevate..Hope to see another drop from you ... 7/10

Origin 04-01-05 03:06 PM

iight thanks for the replies guys..i appreciate it..


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