I wAnt ma sTripes
 

dont let this name fool you/
I ain't soft shit...Fer shure/
Im what they call a memento to all mints-Not mentos for floss mint-straight cash from whyte bricks/
I kno u niggas you wanna hear somethin nu/
Kall me Lucia/
ma missions bring in papers like its news-black magnumz from lagoons-mafia back from both La cruz/
Valentino signafies ma meaning/
bLack Mafia's the reason why im breathin/
black flag, hangin frum ma ryte-make a crip nigga look twice-from twin blocks we roll dice.

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Well... you can work at alot... starting with rhyming... cuz there wasn't much of it and I was confused by that...

but that's why this site is here... there are several tutorials in the help section that will help you elevate, and I'm sure alot of vets would help you if you inquired.

Keep up bro... and check out my open mic... Babylon. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183752

^link.

WHOA say word this Thread's Open, I wrote dis shit like a year and a half back