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He Was Unstoppable
He had incredible technique
Tremendous rhymes, which many seek Vivid thoughts, like gigantic explosions A selective vocabulary, with plenty of emotion His mind was unstoppable Being better then him, was impossible It was like no story ever told His imagery never grew old Fool of talent, rhymes were the shit He had a deep soul that resembled horror flicks He was slick, and quite so clever A skilled poet, one of the best ever His story's were never seen before However..... That poet was known as Valor This was a self glorification open mic rapverse revolution mission with a sick twist to it, so if you dont like it then........ your wack:) |
Im Feelin It.. Good Descriptions And Good Flow.. Stay up With This.. It Was Nice..
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hey Valor it was cool. Not very complex but the flow was nice. I liked the horror flick line. That was the best line in it. Rhyming was good and some multis were included. For such a short tiny piece I'd say it was cool and decent. More of a freestyle to me than an in depth open mic. |
yo man i love evry bit of it rhymed together and tells a story of what a real emcee should be, good multis and structure was good......7/10 probably would of gave u more if there was more to it cuz it was a lil short but good job anywayz
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this i sok..bit short could of escalated on alot of it...but yeh like you said its a mission or suthin....
good read.. return the feed link in sig. |
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