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Tha Q 04-02-05 04:59 PM

How I feel about all these deaths...and in general...POEM
 
between my left and right chest i feel strain
the lights dim in the room, and in my heart
i feel pain, and turmoil and terrible things
even a parable can't bring me out this peril
god's sparrow can't even sing, it's a bee sting
deep within, it's terminal and no one cares
i look up and see emptiness, no one is there
to meet eyes, to me, I'm incomplete, i'm
invisible like air, time I seek but i'm weak
and death surrounds me, whether real or dream
i was born alone and alone I be
i hope to see spring turn cold into heat
what is truly real, what I truly feel
is truly nill, nullified and void
an open space of silent noise, Lord
please save this soul of mine I cry
i don't know who i am now, I lie
i need your hand to hold me down when i
can't stand on my own, what is it to die
i feel it when i open my eyes



The End

DoContinue 04-02-05 06:55 PM

put this is in tha poem forum or somethin

∆ P E X X 04-03-05 04:32 AM

WHO GIVES A SHIT??

Pandemonium 04-03-05 02:05 PM

You fucking emotional queer. Yes, I do know your homosexual.

DON 04-03-05 02:21 PM

doomsday ur sig is fuckin retarded about the pope...man u r dumb the kkk strings up catholics the same as they do to blacks

King Solo 04-03-05 02:24 PM

alright poem...............shud put it in the poetry section for proper feedback and shit

Adam 04-03-05 02:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Doomsday
WHO GIVES A SHIT??



^ I have to agree.

Adam 04-03-05 02:32 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DON
doomsday ur sig is fuckin retarded about the pope...man u r dumb the kkk strings up catholics the same as they do to blacks


The sig is dope. The KKK should string up you. :shoot:

DON 04-03-05 07:35 PM

redbull who told u to get off my nuts?..now get bak on


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