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The Militant 04-03-05 10:24 AM

Sayin good bye...(endin beef)
 
Im the one who alwasy gets called out
Then i see it i reply then i go all out/
I dont ever start the beef i just fhinsh it
Me and deuce put fuel to the fire we aint innocent/
Im so drawn in it i fell like i caused it
If i could go back in time i woulda paused it/
And stoped to realize that this pointless
We shoulda had the sense to avoid this/
But we didnt we beefed we wanted to meet
We seriously almost took this to the street/
So we could fight this shit aint that important
Hood dawg and casper were involved cause i orderd it/
Shit i wouldnt of told'em bout it but he got to talkin
On both of them so we told him to bow down we wasnt stoppin/
Then legend thought if he aint diss me people would forget em
So i sat back read it i was like "Fuck him...he'll get it"/
He thought he could use me as a stepin stone
When every knows im better of left alone/
But this kid must have gurge so he didnt buge
H thought he had to prove that he's tough/
So he decide say shit so wrote a track and aimed it
Directly at em but its cool im used to bein hated/
When u becomeing the best when u got rap on lock
When u makein moves alot of people like to talk/
About shit they dont shit about they gota get it out
Thats ight homie but if u use my name edit it out/
Cause im real sick and tired of beefin
And thats manily the reson im leavin/
This all behind its my time to move on
So go ahead exsprees ya views on/
This track leave feedback but i wont read it
Not because i dont apprecite it but cause i dont need it/
So this is it my good bye my last post its all over
But before i left i just needed some closer/
I did this track not for yall but for me
Im leavin RV cause i know theres more for me/

Speats 04-03-05 03:36 PM

ill tell you something,you try to much to make things look like eminem,u kno wat i meen

Murdah.txt 04-03-05 03:54 PM

werd good drop fam u leave ing sorry to hear that man

Macca 04-04-05 10:27 AM

Leave like the RV or the fucking world would care. and you are my stepping stone.

Armada Da 187 04-04-05 08:22 PM

tight verse, lil eminem style but still tight.


the world or rv wouldnt care????? ummmmmm yeaaaa ok
would anyone care if u left? prolly not so les retrack ya statements legend chea

Kawn Flixx 04-04-05 09:18 PM

[i]Hmm... This was wack sorry,
elevate on using some nice punchlines ,..
Some wordplay and better vocab..
Work on your structure..
and try to even up your bars...
Overall it was average keep it up , you know what to do[/b]

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