CA$per vs Shaky
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 04:58 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 04:35 PM.

Shaky has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 04:37 PM.

I murder an kill ya never heard o ma skill im bringin *heat* to this battle like im curdling milk

The gays that Ive slain never stayed in tha game cuz I battled um once an left um played as ya name

This Rap verse site needs less has wack nerds like you but dnt turn this battle into black verse white dude

Yeah still im sweet fight till I beat n with tha *punches im throwin* ya gonna need them silver teeth

This friendly ghost is bout to end his go and when it comes to mine turn imma send im home

why u shaky dogg?.u must have bad nerves....
on r.v u gettin shot on,more than in army reserves....
tha last battle u didnt even kno how to sign in.......
u lost tha battle ,u gave that herb a fucking win....
shit your lines r like sumthing outta a story book....
tha only way you puffin up is,if u were a pastry cook....
u aint winning another battle in your career....
shit after this one shakys gonna dissapear...
take sum medication.so u can stop shaking.....
obviously its affecting your decision making....

uppin this yall honest votes will be returned.............

Voted For: CA$per

A'ight this was a one sided battle...Casper came with far better punches...Shaky...your flow is shaky...your whole verse is shaky...you need to come up with a better structure, flow, punches and everything...no hate, elevation is good for everybody...

Voted For: CA$per

majorly grilled him what kind of name is Shaky??? and yo u elevated since i seen ur shit last keep it up my fav line is the pastry cook one keep it up and shaky chnage ur name u an emabbarrassement

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

checkin pollz for mahguy............................

Voted For: CA$per

I murder an kill ya never heard o ma skill im bringin *heat* to this battle like im curdling milk
^ Don't really make sense, no punch

The gays that Ive slain never stayed in tha game cuz I battled um once an left um played as ya name
^ his name ain't really played....gay punch

This Rap verse site needs less has wack nerds like you but dnt turn this battle into black verse white dude
^ This is just gibberish. No punch

Yeah still im sweet fight till I beat n with tha *punches im throwin* ya gonna need them silver teeth
^ Gay, no

This friendly ghost is bout to end his go and when it comes to mine turn imma send im home
^ Not a punch, stupid concept, you suck

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why u shaky dogg?.u must have bad nerves....
on r.v u gettin shot on,more than in army reserves....
^ Aight concept, kinda played

tha last battle u didnt even kno how to sign in.......
u lost tha battle ,u gave that herb a fucking win....
^ Lmfao, personal attempt

shit your lines r like sumthing outta a story book....
tha only way you puffin up is,if u were a pastry cook....
^ Aight I guess

u aint winning another battle in your career....
shit after this one shakys gonna dissapear...
^ Naw, not feelin it

take sum medication.so u can stop shaking.....
obviously its affecting your decision making....
^ LMFAO funny closer



aight, casper gets my vote because he had actual punches, some flow and concepts and personals. Shakey just sucked horribly.

Voted For: CA$per

why u shaky dogg?.u must have bad nerves....
on r.v u gettin shot on,more than in army reserves....
GOOD
tha last battle u didnt even kno how to sign in.......
u lost tha battle ,u gave that herb a fucking win....
LOL
shit your lines r like sumthing outta a story book....
tha only way you puffin up is,if u were a pastry cook....
SO-SO
u aint winning another battle in your career....
shit after this one shakys gonna dissapear...
NICE
take sum medication.so u can stop shaking.....
obviously its affecting your decision making....
GOOD
= 8/10 A NICE VERSES

VS

I murder an kill ya never heard o ma skill im bringin *heat* to this battle like im curdling milk
OK
The gays that Ive slain never stayed in tha game cuz I battled um once an left um played as ya name
NAH
This Rap verse site needs less has wack nerds like you but dnt turn this battle into black verse white dude
GOOD
Yeah still im sweet fight till I beat n with tha *punches im throwin* ya gonna need them silver teeth
NICE
This friendly ghost is bout to end his go and when it comes to mine turn imma send im home
AIGHT
=6/10 JUS MISSIN SUMFIN. SUM MORE BETA PUNCHES!!!!!
OVERALL.............
v/ CA$PER E JUS HAD BETA PUNCHES N A GOOD FLOW!!!!!!!!!

uppin this yall 4-0......................................

uppin this shit.....................................

Voted For: CA$per

ok this battles gonna go to Ca$per i mean simple as he rhymed he had straight vocab....but here let me break it down so you know i'm not d/r

Ca$per
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Vocab-6/10:this somthin u need to work on and ya drops would be way better....but i was decent.
Punches-5/10 ehh kinda shaky here....nunt 2 special..work on this a lil bit..
Personals-Didn't really have any cut...try working on personals..thats the key of winnin battles
Metas-3/10:you gotta work on metas too man....was weak here man..
enjoyment:6/10:this was an avg. drop i'm used to reading these in here....was straight

Shaky
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I cant really give you feed on ya battle cuz you didn't have rhyming lines......so it was pretty gay..work on writin rhyming disses...cuz that shit was pretty wack..work on that man..and you'll be in buisness

well since i could only really critic ca$pers and he had a straight drop...he wins..

V/Ca$per