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warrior 04-03-05 05:46 PM

warrior vs Kin*Ethic™
 
Battle Rules:

3-5 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 06:46 PM

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System 04-03-05 06:24 PM

Kin*Ethic™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 06:24 PM.

System 04-03-05 06:42 PM

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 06:42 PM.

Kin*Ethic™ 04-03-05 06:51 PM

Leave this warrior |Deceased-Swiftly| after he sees my verse hell |Delete-Quickly| .. I |Cease-Pity| Cuz my punches 'Quickly Put An End To WAR' like a |Peace-Treaty!|
I |Attack-Wit| |Graphic-Spits| |Packed-Wit| |Acidic-Fists| .. We all know this 'Warriors A Pussy' like Thunder |Kat Kids!| .. Warriors just a |Wack-Bitch| Who |Lacks-Wits| So u can say I 'Killed Warrior' like 'Deleting Lloyd Banks' |Track-List!|
Wat this 'Dick Turn Into A Pussy' & no one |Stop-Yer-Sex-Switch| .. Im |OnTop-Of-Text-Lists| So watch as I 'Put An End To ARR' like pirates with |Proper-English!|

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Idiot Disclaimor:
1. WARrior peace treatys end war
2. Thunder cats was a show wit warriors .. lloyd banks made a song warrior
3. wARRior, pirates say ARRRR get it?

warrior 04-03-05 07:05 PM

aight im rusty but fuck it,

u lame~as~shit, gonna force me to change~my~sig and put ur name~in~it/
cause he the type to reword verses, rewrite em and then claim~they~his/
but the thing is, u knew u couldn't rearrange~the~words~forever/
so he switches sites that way he can just copy and paste~a~verse~together/
battlein me? u the first herb to want to start there record wit a lost~i~guess/
and just cause im scorchin ya work dont mean u ready to be hells architect/
ill give u a heart attack and 8 lines is all~i~need/
cause only way my name'll be in ya sig is if "ED ME" was right after the R.I.P./(warior RIPED ME)

warrior 04-03-05 07:23 PM

good battle son, ya verse was crack. good luck wit the votes

veyetal 04-03-05 07:27 PM

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

not a bad battle, both people came out decent.

warrior. not bad, thought you had some decent lines...opener was kind of stupid, then the 3rd could have been worded better because it was a nice punch, i thought. i think your 3rd bar was what changed my mind, you really fell off on that one, and if it was better, i think you would have taken this one, because your finisher was hot, even though the structure was off and you spelt 'ripped' wrong :thumbup: but keep at it, you seem like you have a handle on battling.

kin*ethic*, hot verse man. you really know how to use multies and that added alot of effectiveness to your verse, but dont get caught up with always using multies because they can dry up pretty quickly and they dont win you battles. i thought you had good metas, great creativity, good wordplay. i was laughing after every punch. some criticism though, dont put all those lines and crap in there, its very distracting to the eyes, and it is just stupid, but overall, you won this

v/kin*ethic*

Kin*Ethic™ 04-03-05 08:52 PM

Thanks For Voting Uppin For More Votes...........!

Lion King 04-03-05 09:26 PM

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

Flow-Blah
Punches-Kin
Metas-Kin
Multis-Kin
Personals-Kin
Enjoyed-Kin

Vote- Kinethic

Kin*Ethic™ 04-03-05 10:27 PM

Thanks For Voting Uppin For More Votes...........!

MaRVJay 04-03-05 10:43 PM

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™


kin:
Leave this warrior |Deceased-Swiftly| after he sees my verse hell |Delete-Quickly| .. I |Cease-Pity| Cuz my punches 'Quickly Put An End To WAR' like a |Peace-Treaty!|
^^^WHOOO...DOPE OPENER GOOD NAME PLAY
I |Attack-Wit| |Graphic-Spits| |Packed-Wit| |Acidic-Fists| .. We all know this 'Warriors A Pussy' like Thunder |Kat Kids!| ..
^^^^I GET IT BUT WASN'T REALLY FEELIN IT
Warriors just a |Wack-Bitch| Who |Lacks-Wits| So u can say I 'Killed Warrior' like 'Deleting Lloyd Banks' |Track-List!|
^^^^CREATIVE SHIT...GOOD NAME PLAY AGAIN
Wat this 'Dick Turn Into A Pussy' & no one |Stop-Yer-Sex-Switch| .. Im |OnTop-Of-Text-Lists| So watch as I 'Put An End To ARR' like pirates with |Proper-English!|
^^^DECENT CLOSER...

WARRIOR:
u lame~as~shit, gonna force me to change~my~sig and put ur name~in~it/
cause he the type to reword verses, rewrite em and then claim~they~his/
^^^GOOD OPENER
but the thing is, u knew u couldn't rearrange~the~words~forever/
so he switches sites that way he can just copy and paste~a~verse~together/
^^^SOUN LIKE DA FIRST BAR U SAID
battlein me? u the first herb to want to start there record wit a lost~i~guess/
and just cause im scorchin ya work dont mean u ready to be hells architect/
^^^DECENT PERSONAL
ill give u a heart attack and 8 lines is all~i~need/
cause only way my name'll be in ya sig is if "ED ME" was right after the R.I.P./(warior RIPED ME)
^^LOL I WAS FEELIN DIS...REAL CLEVA

i gotta with da first dude tho he just played off warrior's name..da multis were hittin but i seen 2 many dudues with dat text style...warrior u had a solid verse ya first 4 lines were like da same thing so dat kind of fukked u up....

v/kin

RETURN DA FAVOR LINSK IN MY SIG & EXPLAIN YA VOTE JUST LIKE I DID 4 YA'LL

warrior 04-03-05 11:55 PM

damn, good votin people lol im gettin more credit then i thought i would wit this verse. anyways this was a good battle kin and dont worry, when i get back on my grind ill give u anotha run, aight?

MaRVJay 04-04-05 01:01 AM

aight and yo ya niggaz need a return votes

Kin*Ethic™ 04-04-05 05:58 AM

Thanks For Voting Upping......And Marvelous Ill Try And Vote On Shit Later

Kin*Ethic™ 04-04-05 02:08 PM

Uppppppppppin This For Votizzles .. So Vote Up!!!.


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