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Zions Desciple 08-02-02 12:57 AM

Ah Masterpiece"
 
Its not as logn as it looks.. i just sepereated the graphs a bit for a easier read..
I've got a third verse being worked on probly.. Not sure yet.

[Verse1]
It's mere intellect - My spheres so intricate - i intersept - The message sent - through the internet - No disrespect - But its mere purplex - that i live to guess - the innactive set of Mindless Tec - Timeless sets - I scheme spineless mess of blind concepts - I must confess - That illness leaves my mind so drenched -

In the modest meant - Of my minds complex - Times concept - left mindless and - distorted with rhymes of phlem - Lies within , leave you dieing from rivaled sin - i rival phlem - With biles of mightless strength - Mindless kid -

I'm used to spark'n illness, in chat messages - Distorting frames - and depict exact nexus's - My right hand leaves the axis pithed - into a state of a timeless spin - Nexus densed - Exact message sent - To leave silenced pithed - and the atlis mithed. - I'm massive kid - My gifts active meant - Was Gods Accident

[Chorus]
I'm an atheist - But still praise to gods.. for these flaming spits - So ancient with - This blaitent pen - That its inc depicts - A grain of phlem - No matter, Life or text - I stay
purplex - with this brain within -

[Verse2]
So ill - That even in "circles" i'm known to Angle Men - Single them - I'm untouched - Like prisoned men in fictioned hymns - Invision this - An incisioned script - thats read through but still depicts an ill inscript - It's illness kid - Purness tends - To gill attempts - with realness swift - though ill invents -

Still intend - to spill intense - from liquids meant - of these gills intent - Such fluent width - I skill the winds - Wit brilliant scripts - more whetted meants - then pyrimids - You hearing this? - I'm so pure - Virulents couldnt kill these mysts - Feel me kid?

My Brains intact - Spit rain exact - I've left more "frames in laps" - And "brains in wraps" - Then "finished domes" once they've "came abstract" - Insanely clap - With Dangerous Raps - I'm mangle'n cats - An Ancient black - Mixed with Anglo Lat - Exchange'n facts - aint no changing that - With raigan facts - I spit rage in raps - Decaying cats - Mere attempts - to peek famous stats - Tameless "match" - With "flames" in "mass" - A dangerous cat - Who's got the language maxed - With saned vocab? -Its illness black - My styles so "dope" - I have you "Paler" then "Cocaine in Sacks" -

•madd•Professor• 08-02-02 05:27 AM

"chk-a chk-a slim shady!"

no umm... dawg... this was tight for the mutlies and rhymes and i think there was flow and meaning i just couldn't cut through all the "-" dashes... but its koo, i liked this kinda sorta and a half, props... peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd

Katastrafy 08-02-02 09:27 AM

shit
 
i think it was tight keep spittin

Zions Desciple 08-02-02 02:01 PM

thanks for the luv...uppn

OnSlaught 08-02-02 03:22 PM

Ya, this had good vocab and multis

Not much of a point to it

But good overall

Peace

Zions Desciple 08-03-02 11:47 AM

eat a dick^^^lol

IllLyricalthaDon 08-03-02 02:46 PM

are yall crazy? to tell tha truth dawg i wasnt really feelin it...to me it wuz a paragraph of rhymes...no flow...no rythm...and you need a dictionary son...cuz if you gonna use dem big wordz...you need ta spell em right...it looks nice on paper...but i dare any of yall ta spit that to a beat...1

Zions Desciple 08-04-02 11:26 AM

audio being send to lyricalthadon....

gimme ur email

IllLyricalthaDon 08-04-02 10:59 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Zions Desciple
audio being send to lyricalthadon....

gimme ur email


I want you to rap that EXACT keystyle, same wordz no more no less...if you think you can do it...Corvette_Kid_69@hotmail.com...if not dont send it...1


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