CA$per vs the kid 523
 

Battle Rules:
3 votes=tko
6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 10:21 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 09:52 PM.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 09:52 PM.

Im sorry but your rapping career ends here, watch how i make the "ghost" dissapear
My rhymes are severe, im so sincere, I'll merk you then take your ass back as a souvenier

Your name is Casper because your not hard, your just friendly
He's 2-0 and thinks he's already HAUNTING THA STREET

Fuck this battle, im done with this gay herb, thinkin he tough
I wont be surprised this verse spilt blood

so we in tha same crew,imma still grill you hard....
you lines are out of this world,like captain picard....
you keep battling people from your own crew.....
your just lucky this battle aint a literary review....
your tha snitch in this family,i dont trust you one bit.....
so go re write your verse,come back and re-submit.....
u better re-think your plan,to come out victorious....
your rymes are not there,there very notorious...

i fucked up the last line.. its supposed to read " fuck this battle, im done with this gay herb, thinkin he tough
but the bitch better stop talkin b4 i staple stitch his mouth shut"

uppin this shit for some votes

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This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

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Voted For: CA$per

kid 523:
Im sorry but your rapping career ends here, watch how i make the "ghost" dissapear
My rhymes are severe, im so sincere, I'll merk you then take your ass back as a souvenier
^^GOOD OPEENR..SHIT WAS KIND OF LONG..BUT U HAD A COUPLE MULTI'S IN IT AND A PERSONAL

Your name is Casper because your not hard, your just friendly
He's 2-0 and thinks he's already HAUNTING THA STREET
^^^FRIENDLY & STREET..DONT RYHME

Fuck this battle, im done with this gay herb, thinkin he tough
I wont be surprised this verse spilt blood
^^^HORRIBLE CLOSER DOGG.....


casper:
so we in tha same crew,imma still grill you hard....
you lines are out of this world,like captain picard....
^^^WACK OPENER..I DIDN'T GET IT
you keep battling people from your own crew.....
your just lucky this battle aint a literary review....
^^WEAK
your tha snitch in this family,i dont trust you one bit.....
so go re write your verse,come back and re-submit.....
^^^DECENT..YA BEST LINE
u better re-think your plan,to come out victorious....
your rymes are not there,there very notorious...
^^WACK

i gotta go with casper tho even tho his verse was real wack..cuzz he made his words ryhme and kid u forced ya shit..

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Voted For: CA$per

A'ight...this was a weak ass battle...

Casper...I've seen better from you...seems like you went half-assed big time on this one...punches was a'ight...flow was pretty good...overall, just get more hard hitting punches...no hate, just elevate...

The Kid...get ya structure fixed. Your second bar doesnt rhyme either...your closer was a'ight...but fix ya structure and ya flow...punches were weak here other thank your closer.

Close, but weak battle.

No hate. Elevate.

Both of you.