sabre vs judicial
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R
No Bullshit

Please Explain your Votes.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 11:57 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

sabre has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 11:29 PM.

Judicial has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 11:31 PM.

iight yo lets do this.......

Scorchin.......scratches to holes with blood pourin
decapitate, gut lacerate, and donate this faggots organs
yeah, this kid is morbid, leave his vocal cords in proportions
dis kid sought to judicial, ha ha this boys a silly man
wit da high class words i spit'll leave ya thoughts on da ceiling fan
switch da verse 2 da other hand and let my verbs remain in ya fuckin memory glands

record of 6-1, but any skill from you has yet to be seen
finally got time to battle, get permission from the queen?
what are you 13, a wife on the net, well man, i hope shes a dandy
adopt a kid in africa, send over a computer, then you have a family
but seriously, when it comes to battling, youre just lost in the fog
the only vet youll ever battle, is if the clinic kills your dog
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-nothing special, key'd it up pretty quick

explans: apparantly he is "married" to drama queen on here
the rest should be pie, if you dont get it, dont vote.

iight iight uppin.....that DQ shit is played bout now tho....but good shit

played eh? when you've only been in 13 battles. okay, whatever you say.

Voted For: Judicial

Judicials verse

it seems like you were going at your full potentiol on this battle, like your style though, and it was pretty much one sided.. structure was kinda off but vocabulary was decent and made up for it... not really punches in there but it was still impressive and kept me readin..
OVERALL 6.5/10

Sabre's Verse.. I'll break his down..

record of 6-1, but any skill from you has yet to be seen
finally got time to battle, get permission from the queen?
^umm... what? 3/10
what are you 13, a wife on the net, well man, i hope shes a dandy
adopt a kid in africa, send over a computer, then you have a family
^again... what? 3/10
but seriously, when it comes to battling, youre just lost in the fog
the only vet youll ever battle, is if the clinic kills your dog
^4/10 but too late to have a good punch

overall your verse was kinda wack.. no hate, your punches seemed like they were supposed to be funny but they were stupid... no hate again... and your lines were strecthed but your structure was better...

OVERALL 3.5/10

I have spoken... Wordness...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

you bitch, what a stupid vote, did you not read my explanations i wrote down for idiots like you?

yo you can suck my nuts cause your weak as fuck...

yes, it was a 5 minute key, plus you didn't get my personals, and i will not be a faggot with you

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uppin dis battle..........................................

uppin uppin uppin......................................

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