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Nynth Degree 04-04-05 03:55 PM

Turban. (0-2) vs. Vango (1-1)
 
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Good luck to both.

Bangalore 04-04-05 05:37 PM

i'm check'n in to this muthafucka

Vango 04-04-05 06:11 PM

yo check, and why don't you drop early since youve had two weeks now.... lol

Bangalore 04-04-05 06:31 PM

lol i havent written anything yet want me to write something now? gimmie a hour or so

Bangalore 04-04-05 07:41 PM


question ?are u nervous?ya punches lose focus.went from bombs to kisses
check this like transformers your rhymes morph from punches to misses
i attest to dis . my rhymes provide the "shock" for his "verbal cardiac arrest"
his spit fest is simply like a overturned gold fish, deceased and worthless
i'll confess he prolly tried to use my name and a towel as a " weakness "
but instead he wrote his verse and it turned out to be 1 big "Weak Diss"
no need 4 a "blue print" trust me he's bout as volatile as a bomb made of K'nex
this kid shoulda been a splooge on the floor o well , he's still a fucked up mess
kids not a lyricist he's just shit only reason he's known is cuz of his sig ,
believe this if asked if he got more play than the pic,he'd remain speechless
obviously he's irrelevant , vango,i ignored him , and simply forgot to show
but he can't brag about that one cuz i woulda dropped if he was notable

Vango 04-05-05 12:10 AM

How do I feel about battling Turban, it's like having sex with a fat chick
Cuz I can't really get "UP" for this battle, and I'd rather him swallow than spit
Claiming on your profile your a spy, is that some kinda sick joke
I asked you if you were dope on a lie detector, and it started to smoke
Your Osama's brother right and you got weapons of mass destruction
See I'm a ESPN highlight Kid, while your just Pardon the Interruption
After this battle you'll be like Justin Timberlake, "Crying yourself a River"
Cuz your like the post office with Anthrax, simply unable to Deliver
So don't try your snake charming on the voters, they can't hear your flutes
Get the hint kid your verse is wack, that's why you push reply and it reboots
__________________

Bangalore 04-05-05 12:11 AM

lol i dropped where r u?

King Solo 04-05-05 11:37 AM

aight this was a hot battle......................

Turban. - yo ure drop was tight.................flow and structure were on point, i don't know what the whole super-size text was for, but it didn't really affect ure drop. ure wordplay was nice, a lot of good punches hittin hard, u were consistent and creative in places with a few punches that had me laughin. vocab was gud, some nice similes and metas in there for an overall nice drop. ure personals were there but some cud have been better.
Best Lines
question ?are u nervous?ya punches lose focus.went from bombs to kisses
check this like transformers your rhymes morph from punches to misses

Vango - nice drop yo, ure flow and structure were tight, kept shit together and flowin well, i was feelin ure verse. the wordplay was tight, a lot of funny punches, u were consistent to with punches all hittin gud. creativity was there, nuthin really played except for that unable to deliver line, but u flipped that still and made it gud. personals were dope especially the closer u did, that shit had me laughin mad. overall i think u edged this battle with more consistently harder punches and doper personals.
Best Lines
Your Osama's brother right and you got weapons of mass destruction
See I'm a ESPN highlight Kid, while your just Pardon the Interruption

So don't try your snake charming on the voters, they can't hear your flutes
Get the hint kid your verse is wack, that's why you push reply and it reboots__________________

V/ - Vango

Magic5 04-05-05 03:01 PM

Rofl @ hot battle. This sucked.

question ?are u nervous?ya punches lose focus.went from bombs to kisses
check this like transformers your rhymes morph from punches to misses

vs.

After this battle you'll be like Justin Timberlake, "Crying yourself a River"
Cuz your like the post office with Anthrax, simply unable to Deliver

But Vango recycled this..
Your Osama's brother right and you got weapons of mass destruction
See I'm a ESPN highlight Kid, while your just Pardon the Interruption

And put simply, Anthrax lines may have been decently good when people first starting to send anthrax through the mail, but right now.. it's getting to be extremely played.. I just haven't seen lines like that on this site.. Turban's had a hint of wittiness and had a lot of potential if worded better..

So,

Vote - Turban.

Sik Wit It 04-05-05 07:14 PM

Your Osama's brother right and you got weapons of mass destruction
See I'm a ESPN highlight Kid, while your just Pardon the Interruption
After this battle you'll be like Justin Timberlake, "Crying yourself a River"
Cuz your like the post office with Anthrax, simply unable to Deliver

vs

Nothing

Vango took this one...simply had harder hitting punches...

v/ Vango

Vango 04-05-05 08:06 PM

lmao at mimesis hate vote.. please strike it from the record, your such a hater...

Bangalore 04-05-05 08:56 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Skriptz
Your Osama's brother right and you got weapons of mass destruction
See I'm a ESPN highlight Kid, while your just Pardon the Interruption
After this battle you'll be like Justin Timberlake, "Crying yourself a River"
Cuz your like the post office with Anthrax, simply unable to Deliver

vs

Nothing

Vango took this one...simply had harder hitting punches...

v/ Vango



how is your osamas brother right and you got weapons of mass destruction .. a diss...anthrax disses are old as shit c'mon

.Ike. 04-05-05 10:51 PM

question ?are u nervous?ya punches lose focus.went from bombs to kisses
check this like transformers your rhymes morph from punches to misses

vs.

How do I feel about battling Turban, it's like having sex with a fat chick
Cuz I can't really get "UP" for this battle, and I'd rather him swallow than spit
Claiming on your profile your a spy, is that some kinda sick joke
I asked you if you were dope on a lie detector, and it started to smoke
Your Osama's brother right and you got weapons of mass destruction
See I'm a ESPN highlight Kid, while your just Pardon the Interruption

V/ Vango....

cause he had a way more consistent verse...and his punches just hit a lot harder...personals would have been nice in this battle...Turban had 1...but i wasnt really feelin it.....but other than that...this goes to Vango for better punches....

Magic5 04-06-05 12:26 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vango
lmao at mimesis hate vote.. please strike it from the record, your such a hater...


Why? Because first you recycle then use a punch that may have been decent in 2003? Hop off my nuts.

You lost.

I vote honestly.. it's a fucking text battle league. I have better shit to do then purposefully make someone I dont like lose, only because I dont like them..

Typical 04-06-05 02:45 PM

vango
drop was funny and flowed, third bar had a creative analogy that was
well formed and refreshingly hilariouse............
yooo i blacked out!......who tha fuck wrote dat^

turban
i was bored with the opener and didnt find much excitment any where else
splooge line was cool but flowed horribly. closer made a great statment

v/vango


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