MarvJay1009 (1-1) vs. (Jimmy Pocketz) (1-1)
 

check....how eva many lines u want....

8 linez..........check

dog just stop it,heard u use 2 do topicals & be off da topic's.
jimmy's a fag just like a "pool game" men put they "balls in POCKETZ".
when he was SM he use da say fukk da T.E now dis coward is big.
bow 2 da kid,ya bars make "jay-z" sad datz y he 'lookin down in ya sig'.
jimmy's wack on beats bar's 2 basic ppl in his hood wont press his tape.
so da only time u'll "Drop a single" it'll be in ya "church collection plate".
off a cd u will not profit,lyin bout u rap pac & be on da block stop it.
must be talkin bout da "microwave snack" cuzz i dont think u "hot-pockets"

Listen Marvin u couldnt Conceal "Depth" even if you "Bundled Diggins"
Marvs Bars Sloppy & Inconsistent like Signatures from Russel Simmons
Truthfully J couldnt Spit hot if u Swallowed a Quanity of Hella Sparkelers
Thats why No one Answers ya "Call Outs" like Tone Deaf TelleMarketers
Talkin bout this is your win Kid?..Heres Advice for u......please Go Bias
But Still Marvins Punches dont land........Like David Swingin on Goliath
Stop Rhyming ya not Coniving ya not Mcgrady So u dont get a RightStair
If u were an Arabic Runnin 4 Office..Still wouldnt be Americas Night Mare

i believe Marv killed this battle...... both took every bar to diss the other person and drop some metas and punches, but Marvs were alot hard hittin.. for instance, both of u did a sig personal, but Marvs was alot more effective..... i was feelin the "balls in Pocketz" line, lol...... real funny.... every bar was a nice personal, and it came along with a meta that made it more hard hittin.... troop on the other hand looked like he really only had metas, but they werent as good as yours.... i think urs were better cuz they had nameplay to go along with it, like ur opener and closer.... u definetely won this....

V/Marv

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dog just stop it,heard u use 2 do topicals & be off da topic's.
jimmy's a fag just like a "pool game" men put they "balls in POCKETZ".
when he was SM he use da say fukk da T.E now dis coward is big.
bow 2 da kid,ya bars make "jay-z" sad datz y he 'lookin down in ya sig'.
jimmy's wack on beats bar's 2 basic ppl in his hood wont press his tape.
so da only time u'll "Drop a single" it'll be in ya "church collection plate".

vs.

nothing.

one-sided battle. marv had a pretty consistant verse. except for the last bar. i just wasn't feelin it. was kinda wack. rest was pretty nice though. pocketz, again you came with similies. and not very good ones at that.

v/ marv

dog just stop it,heard u use 2 do topicals & be off da topic's.
jimmy's a fag just like a "pool game" men put they "balls in POCKETZ".

vs.

Garbage.

Vote - MarvJay

That bar was tight yo.

Looks Like A Knockout For Marv

this was a close battle, but marv came harder with better punches.......he had some better personals and was just a lil more creative than jimmy ....marv had some aight werdplay.....but jimmy jus had some played lines and shit

v/marvjay

vote marvjay, better overall verse........and more consistent punches. pocketz best punch was the tone deaf telelmarketers but that wasn't quite enough.

i gotta vote marv jay.
honestly im shocked i thought troop would take this one
good battle, no real weak disses just some didnt land as hard as marv jays,
that last punch i read during lunch, i was eating hot pockets, so i laughed my ass off.
im sure troop wll come back harder though
v/ marv jay

dog just stop it,heard u use 2 do topicals & be off da topic's.
jimmy's a fag just like a "pool game" men put they "balls in POCKETZ".
LMFAO... nice ass punch man. one of the best i've heard. 9.5/10

when he was SM he use da say fukk da T.E now dis coward is big.
bow 2 da kid,ya bars make "jay-z" sad datz y he 'lookin down in ya sig'.
lol another hot ass bar. this lookin to be a classic verse. 9/10

jimmy's wack on beats bar's 2 basic ppl in his hood wont press his tape.
so da only time u'll "Drop a single" it'll be in ya "church collection plate".
good punch right here. not as hot as the other ones though. 8/10

off a cd u will not profit,lyin bout u rap pac & be on da block stop it.
must be talkin bout da "microwave snack" cuzz i dont think u "hot-pockets"
aight this was the only thing from stoppin this from being a legendary verse. 6.5
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Listen Marvin u couldnt Conceal "Depth" even if you "Bundled Diggins"
Marvs Bars Sloppy & Inconsistent like Signatures from Russel Simmons
an aight bar nothin special but still aight. 7.0

Truthfully J couldnt Spit hot if u Swallowed a Quanity of Hella Sparkelers
Thats why No one Answers ya "Call Outs" like Tone Deaf TelleMarketers
aight man man now this shit gettin good. 8.5

Talkin bout this is your win Kid?..Heres Advice for u......please Go Bias
But Still Marvins Punches dont land........Like David Swingin on Goliath
i get it. didnt really hit hard but it was a solid bar. 8.0

Stop Rhyming ya not Coniving ya not Mcgrady So u dont get a RightStair
If u were an Arabic Runnin 4 Office..Still wouldnt be Americas Night Mare
first line sucked but the second line made this into a good bar. 9.0

MarvJay:33
Jimmy Pocketz: 32.5

Aight ima have to give this one to Marvjay. this battle was one i actually liked reading cause it was nothin but punches thrown. the only difference is marvs punches was hotter then troops. the only reason it was close to me was cause i hated marvs last bar. overall this was a good battle. but as i said marv took it on punches. cant really say nothin else about it cause punches is all the battle consisted of. they took every chance to swing at each other.

Vote/Marv JAy

LMAO @ people thinking a gay punch is good

im sorry, i mean marv won, but no becuase of that line.. cuz gay punches are that, ... gay

the drop a single line was nice though, i liked that one