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Chaotic Contusions...
Yeah....Yeah...Back To Open Mics Again....
Remove the fabric to release all the static of inner tensions... With the creases and never ceasing babbage that sinners mention... Which goes in and out of ears formulating the wrong facts... Bringing hurt til' it's impossible to hold all it's throngs back... When white trash and white suburbia has a long cast... Then viewing a dark male with a gun as a strong black... It's cause-react. no wonder the humans are so psychotic Universal law is choas. so we're bred from the chaotic... And anything that can go wrong, was never right... Polar oppposites. we sleep when we die and it's never night... Thought it's never light... Run from the unknown that has severed life... But that's the human strife, eatting more than we could ever bite... Opinionated facts leaving answers that are never right... Fighting through this war with companions that don't ever fight... Shells raining down. wanna hide. spread my wings and fly... The bullet called life strike's me down, till I'll never die... Till I'll never cry. till I never see my friends again... Till I can barely breath. praying lighty, Lord it's me again... |
thats real talk its real coo i like it
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This was a dope peice...
alittle short for me but okay.. Maybe next time you can make it alittle longer.. But it was good , your structure was alittle off.. You had nice feeling and nice wordplay Overall keep it up , and hope to see another drop from you Ps:Drop a link to an OM' you have left feedback on or this will be closed |
Thanks for the feed yall.......but UUpppiiinnn......
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good drop..some solid multis in it...good imagery..I liked this..
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Uuuuuupppppiiiiinnnnn.......For More Feed......
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yep i agree wid d replies dis is a gud piece an shudnt get slept on fo real hot imegry gud volcab use an gud rhymes...... i like it....... keep elevate
p.s .......... drop a reply to dis plz....... return d favour... tnx ~1~ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195552 <-- clik link |
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