Crime of Mouth
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184534
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2069965

aight i stayed home sick today, got a lil bored finished up this track.

"crime of mouth"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/newmethedmusic.htm

Listening to it right now.. oh shyt.. lmao.. I got this beat and bout to make a christian song with it.... hahaha.. lol.. your voice is funny man.. sounds like you can't really open your mouth much.. lol the verse is okay. but too simple.. lol your chorus is okay.. lol "You ain't talking bout pringles?" lol funny line.. the second verse is too simple once again.. if you use simple rhymes then try to make it creative.. the chorus isn't creative.. not catchy at all.. only very little.. and 3rd verse is the same.. damn dude now i don't wanna use this beat nemore lol..

7/10..

plz leave feed on my song..

I Promise

it was ok....wasnt rele feeling it tho......flowis cool lyrics is str8...stayup