J DOT vs ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No alias votes



You wanted it, you got it.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-06-05 at 07:34 PM

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::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 11:54 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 10:06 AM.

Merking #2 in progress....

hmmm. I didnt get kicked outta NOK hoe. but, decent drop i guess. uppin

Voted For: J DOT

I think JDOT took this. I think he had some harder hitting mettas and a few better punches. I think slob had the personals category, alot of good personals, but irrelevant i think. this was a close battle, but i think dot just came out stronger, and took the win. no hate. j came a lil bit harder wit better rhyming and shit also. better structure from j too. slob, u had some stretched lines, and it took away from your flow. my overall verse goes to j in this one.
v/j dot

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Voted For: J DOT

u had better more funnier punchlines and more creativity and better disses and easier ta read since blue makes the shit hard ta read. gotz my vote

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

whoooooooo....slob really brung it dis battle

j dot:
You can shoot me in tha legs so we can even it out
Cause you talking out ya ass like you aint needin yo mouth
^^^UMM CASSIDY SAID SOMTHIN VERY SIMILIAR 2 DIS INSTEAD OD NEEDIN HE SAID NEED...IT WAS A WEAK OPENER THO
Ya spit hot shit? Then dot’ll give ya top lip fever blisters
Don’t make sudden moves, show me ur hands like Jesus pictures
^^^GOOD PUNCH
Fuck wit me, you’ll be using RV money for protection
But dot’s a beast; you’ll be drawing blood like erections
^^^WASN'T FEELIN DIS
I stake down houses, take down spouses, and stab wit pickets
You don’t spit ‘sick’; you just ‘sun-burned’ like pounding ‘ricket’s
^^^NAH
You aint a killa from blue city…I remove shitty verses
Ya cursing…like a drunk and passing out on purpose
^^^NO...FAM STEP YA GAME UP
I merk kids, im tha baddest, fucka legendary status
My verse is good for 5 votes, so when I’m done u can have this
^^^WEAK CLOSER...

BASICALLY YA VERSE WAS WACK FAM REAL TALK...IMA HONEST DUDE NUN OF YA LINES STOOD OUT...NO PERSONALS OR NOTHIN

slobk:
Engulfed With The Faith..U Da Best?..Think Again..Im Reluctant To Say..
That Dot Is Gay..And This "Lonely" Fag..Has To Nominate "Friends Of Da Day" *
^^^COOL PERSONAL...GOOD WAY 2 START IT OFF
Clone Dis Hatian..Put Ur "Moms In My Brain"..So See Could See "Zone Relations"..
And U Must Know U A Herb..When U Get Kicked Out From Your Own Creation..(NOK)
^^LMAOOOO..ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL FAM
U A Raged Chick..Think U Hood Just Could U Supposedly Raised Clicks?..
And Imma Tell U Wat I Tol N.O.K Members..Get Off Of "J's" Dick..
^^^DECENT LINE
J Dot On Men's Dick..Always Show Em' Love..Man Up Cus..
And U Thinkin We Swingin Forearms In Your Direction..The Way TE Duckin Us..
^^^^COULD OF WORDED DIS BETTA
Pop Shit?..And Get Away Wit It..Put The "Master" On Ur Mouth..To "Lock" Ur Lips..
U Mis-Guided Like Five Star Crips..Cave Ur Chest In..To Sho U A Real Flat Top Bitch..
^^^NAH
He Branched Off From His Crew Like Kanye..Dot Is Honestly Beyond Gay..
And May I Say..U On "Jay-Z" Nuts So Much Homie..It's Beyond Say (Beyonce)
^^^WHOOOOOOOOO DIS DIS PUNCHLINE WAS CRAZEE
RV Members..This Is The Guy U Should Try And Avoid..He's A Bad Choice..
And When NOK Went Audio..He Quit..Cuz He Aint Want No1 To Hear His Fag Voice..
^^LMAOOOOOO...GOOD PERSONAL DATZ TRUE THO HE DID LEAVE AFTA THEY WENT AUDIO
I'll Spaz On U..Homie U A Crew-Hopper..Now He In TE Aka "The Established" Crew..
And The Crew He Founded..Is Now Fightin..Just To Be Recognized As An "Established Crew"..
^^^GOOD WORDPLAY
Have Respect..Gangsta Homie?..U Just Known For Bein A Hood-Wreck..
And RV Niggaz Wouldnt Mind..If U Followed In Your Role Model's Footsteps..(Retirement)
^^^^U MEANT JAY-Z RITE?...IF SO DAT WAS A GOOD CLOSER..

GET IT RITE THO...IM NOT IN L.S AND I WAS IN DA ESTABLISHMENT SO DIS IS NOT A HATE OR CREW VOTE...I VOTED LINE 4 LINE DOT SLEEPED ON SLOBK N GOT MERKED..

RETURN DAT FAVOR YA'LL LINKS IN MY SIG

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

heh I can't vote on this battle mayn. I'm not blocked its just it won't let me. dayum. hey lemme break it down anyways.
Nice structure J Dot. heh. Slobk omg I can't see ya verse. please fix it. its nice and colorful but too isdnvisdn. BRIGHT.
Do NOT I REPEAT DO NOT USE GODS NAME INVIEN.

return dat fukkin favor muthafukkaz

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

word.... not bad, slobk = lines are stretched and you rhymed the established crew with established crew....i dont have enough posts to vote, but jdot got this.

^^LMAO..Anyway Uppin On This Battle Yo..................

uppin this bullshitting battle. DOT DOT DOT DOT DOT DOT bitchnigga

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

da fuk dis nigga bit dat 2nd n 3rd off cass he said U TALKIN OUT YA ASS LIKE U DONT NEED YA MOUF den I SPIT HOT MAH TOP LIP GOT FEVER BLISTERS fukn biter i dont even have 2 vote slobk got dis cuz da otha nigga a biter fukn queer lol

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