J-Rin vs J Dot
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines

No Crew Votes
No hate
No d/r
No Recycling
No Biting

1 day check
1 day drop

your bout to get your fuckin ass killed

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-07-05 at 10:17 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

J-Rin has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 10:18 AM.

Aight, it's a be happening somethin like this here below on this nigga

J Dot boy, didn't ya mama tell ya not to talk to strangers/
See, this type of thing will put you in all kinds of danger//1
Mess wit tha real 'J', J-Rin'll put ya life to a real quick end/
Cause 'J' will spot you then 'Dot' ya eye, son, ya won't win//2
I'll grab up ya barz an' beat ya wit 'em, except they break/
Like you they frail an' your fake, remake ya rhymes on a take//3
Go ahead an' live this beatin,'livin' it live' like that on street-in/
You ain't got no heat heatin', boy, ya rapcareer death ya meetin'//4
Kid, ya suck harder than a Dirt Devil, ya ain't even on my level/
Ya can't even tip tha scale, hell, ya needa elevate, get a shovel//5
Like we playin' ball I go for a home run an' get me a grand slam/
So I run it all while you go for a single run an' strike out, damn//6
Kid, ya goin'a be lucky to come out of this battle scared an' bruised/
Ya goin' past tha ER an ICU wit ya old bitten lyrics that are re-used//7
Time an' time again, I've shitten shit better than what ya spittin/
Ill-defentily ya ain't ill even while vets are bitten, your wakly written//8
Tell me, really, if ya was tha shit wouldn't ya have a real deal/
Not battlin' an ameuter thats killin' you, watchin' blood spill, fo' real//9
That's enough for ya, I didn't 'Dot' ya, i dropped ya whole career/
So i'm tha new nigga to fear in here, take that shit in ya ear an hear//10

now nigga, your turn

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 05:18 PM.

Merking #3 in progress...

Voted For: J DOT

dot took this one in my book.
rin-u almost had it, because u started off mad dope, but then u started slackin. yo verse started to go downhill fast. u shoulvw just found a good stoppin point and ended it. thats why i couldnt give u tha vote, no consistency.
plus-dot-u came harder wit tha mettas in this one. thats about it. i think this was a lil rushed, but u were lucky to come out on top with this one. not tha best verse i seen from you, but i think you took this one. better structure and better consistency. i think yo had a good opener and closer and body, thats why i gave u tha vote. just a overall better verse to me. no hate to noone in this one, just keep elevating.
v goes to jdot cause he made a better attempt at a diss and i think his was more structure and well thought of.
v/jdot

aight up on this,
J dropped ya verse a minute after acceptin', sup wit that, is it prewitten?

oh. wow! i thought i accepteda long time ago. when i logged on, i wrote it in a word doc. so it can look a lil more decent, then i just copy n pasted it into here. i got no time for prewrittin. uppin. good lookin out on tha vote young.

Voted For: J DOT

J-Rin on the rebound, aint elevated since
13 posts and battling DOT?... I’m not convinced

Meh could have been better

I run thru more emcee’s than hockey rinks, u kids cant jam me
Tryna shoot me like a puck, I’ll take care of yo family

WHAT? flowed abd rhymed nicely though

You’re a weak slut and your speech is played like 2pac threads
Cause when DOT shoot, he’ll dye yo shit like sisco’s head

Not hard but amusing.

So go head and try and play me, u’ll get ya banana split quick
I’m owning you right now cause like a slave u’ll get whipped

Decent but could use a little wordplay

And you talking like you tough, but I see you got no guts
Keep making false moves, you be in a box like pizza hut

Not that bad of a closer.

J DOT
most of your verse I didn't get but your flow was nice. Beautifl structure and rhymes is what made me like this verse and a couple of decent line. Keep it up mayn.


J Dot boy, didn't ya mama tell ya not to talk to strangers/
See, this type of thing will put you in all kinds of danger

OMG.

Mess wit tha real 'J', J-Rin'll put ya life to a real quick end/
Cause 'J' will spot you then 'Dot' ya eye, son, ya won't win

Quit that shit I mean it. Its wack

I'll grab up ya barz an' beat ya wit 'em, except they break/
Like you they frail an' your fake, remake ya rhymes on a take

To be honest that was decent. IF YOU REALLY EVER SAW HIM

Go ahead an' live this beatin,'livin' it live' like that on street-in/
You ain't got no heat heatin', boy, ya rapcareer death ya meetin'//

line was played. Never rush in a battle...

Kid, ya suck harder than a Dirt Devil, ya ain't even on my level/
Ya can't even tip tha scale, hell, ya needa elevate, get a shovel//

Played iight thats quite enough


J RIN fix ya structure and I'm only rating the amount of line I did j dot. Fix ya punchline and quit self glorifying yaself. You just need to get rid of these //... That shit is wack. But keep elevating...


v/jdot with better wordplay structure and punches.
I enjoyed his more than yours J RIN.

RTF

Voted For: J DOT

J-dot won this one with better punchelines...wordplay was better then j rin...structre was equall on both verses...rhymes go to j dot...flow also goes to j dot

best line-- You’re a weak slut and your speech is played like 2pac threads
Cause when DOT shoot, he’ll dye yo shit like sisco’s head

8/10

word. good lookin out on tha explained votes. uppin this shit.

Voted For: J DOT

You’re a weak slut and your speech is played like 2pac threads
Cause when DOT shoot, he’ll dye yo shit like sisco’s head
So go head and try and play me, u’ll get ya banana split quick
I’m owning you right now cause like a slave u’ll get whipped
And you talking like you tough, but I see you got no guts
Keep making false moves, you be in a box like pizza hut

good battle first off.....

good punches by both of you, good wordplay...i think J Dot cam harder tho and he flowed harder na mean.....but dem lines convinced me haha good battle....but i think that J DOT took this on ..i already explained myself

vote-J DOT

uppin this. lemme put him away in the first page.,,......

this nigga aint been on since he dropped this. WTF. uppin damn. one more vote

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