Pandemonium vs MuRcInAl
 

4 bars
no crew, hate, d/r, unexplained votes
no recycling, or biting
you can feed off the other persons verse if you wish too

g'luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-09-05 at 04:35 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Pandemonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 04:38 PM.

MuRcInAl has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 04:38 PM.

Upping.
 

Av verse Murc, it aint over lol....upping..upping..

Average?...........whats that make yours.................

Voted For: MuRcInAl

murc:
Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^^LOL FUNNY SHIT
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
^^^WELL THOUGHT OUT...I WAS FEELIN DIS LINE
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
^^^^NAH FAM..LIFE IS A BOARD U GOT IT MIXED UP
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^^DOPE CLOSER...I LIKE DA NAME PLAY


pand:
Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^^WEAK OPENER FAM
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^^^^UUHH KIND OF ALRITE
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
^^^^WEAK
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
^^^WEAK CLOSER....

PAND U CAME U REAl weak fam...no pesonals from both of u but murc's verse had a lil bit more creativity

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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^weak opener
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^^nice
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
^^wording was a bit off on the 2nd line, not feelin it
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
^^decent closer
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overall ya had 2 nice bars, pretty good..didnt like the large text but thats besides the point.i didnt see any personals but the body cast line was ya hardest punch..


Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^eh, better then the other verses opener
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
^^wasnt feeling this bar
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
^^punch is played, not very effective
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^nice closer..best concept in the battle, wording a bit off
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overall ya were more consistent with punches n personals
ya closer was nice....prolly couldve been worded better to hit harder but bar 4 bar in my opinion you came harder inthis battle...

murc:
Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^^LOL
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
Nice Shit

Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
Ummmmmmmm Ok
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
Nice


pand:
Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^^Decent
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
Decent....
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
Naw.........
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
Naw.............

Vote-MurCinAL

He Had A Better Verse He Also Stayed Consistant.......

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