Taking Shots
 

It's like historical figures sinning, or deplorable
Tendencies forming, pending hormonal entities
Formerly known as eve's tempting, it's horrible
I used to know a nigga good at multies, now he faulty
Salty nigga act real chalky, like boards faded talkin'
Jaded comical con shit, thinkin' I'm bitch cuz I'm nice
Switchin' up cuz he got a lil' life, I saw youngin' twice
Flip shit like Dawes, Dominique I'mma need all speed
To ditch dog's need for my balls, I bleed cuz he all teeth
Had a crew with kid, through Niq a bone he was truly bitch
True mistake Tha Q portrayed, kid's a true crew tick
Stuck on what's the hottest flava of the day, son is played
Summer days hot blaze can't melt this ice, under-paid
Livin' above means is dumb, please come up to my shelf
You ain't made it homie, so stop lyin' to yaself...
Furthermore, I heard of more herbs to your nerve u whore
U keep the clinic in bizzness, ya dick is quite terminal
Fuckin' married hoes thinkin' u pimp, u just a str8 loser
Who's the fuck up settin' example for his son, ur fake truth
Ain't a breakthrough, you can't break Q, already ate ya face
Fools make mistakes I choose to forsake, and u stuck in place
Dude you ape-like ain't right you fake, like size-A to "AYE!-type"
Fuckin' asshole my last flow crashed yours, a label...they might
Sign judge Mabelene before u...think, at least she rock bars
Shock jocks far from my block, u fly through I stop
Get ya ass thrashed like I. Rock...I got fuckin nothin to lose
Now, choose ya fate...like the Holy Graile grasp a holy Hell...
Move slowly the shell blowin', heads-off like voodoo spells
Divine Concepts sound cock-set...I turned out half ya line
Dopest nigga there got crushed, fuck...I got half-a-mind
To bash ur kind...flunky niggas sensitive like razor bump
Ugly shit...buggin' me to join u fucks...lips, raise em up

uh!







**Divine concepts is a crew on this other site I'm at. Their crew is soft as hell. The majority of this diss was aimed at Tru Legend. He's also in Divine Concepts. He's a crew hopper who jus act bitch-made to me. So, fuck it.










http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184747
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184674
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2059975
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185080

Shit was nice work on structure thou vocab was great wordplay was great I really liked this shit because not many people could of rhymed bout this it was hot 8.5/10. PM me if you wanna collab.

btw rtf link in sig!

good shit Q, I like your lyrics, it was a good diss, these are lyrics to a soundclick diss no? Anyways, nice meta's, nice rhyming and structure was good, great flow yo, vocab was good as usual, but it looks like you took a dictionary and tried to get complex *only saying that cuz you said it to me in my om :thumbup: 8/10

rtf in sig, thnx

Return the favor hoe bag

^^lol......
your vocab was off the hook on your opener..the body of the
verse was aight some nice lines, it was up n down with ya flow
i liked how you closed it though, i thought you definately spit
an overall nice verse....."got ya fuckin point across"...lol...
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Q RTF IN MY SIG....i think you'll relate styles...