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Armada Da 187 04-07-05 12:11 PM

Fuck My Dad (MaRVJAY diss reply)
 
Dont talk about how you named me bill the Names Ray
plus I look nothing like you, your not my real day anway
Its all good not playin catch in the yard, pop its ok
I was confused you walkin with other guys, ya were gay
Armada got picked on in school all the time cuz of you
How could you say you my dad when you love cock fool?
Mom divorced you cuz you was cheatin wit the Mail Man
Last time I saw you, you was packin up sayin i need a real man
right before you left to get in the taxi oh i remember
You told me you loved me, I flipped you the middle finger
cuz you wasnt no father to Armada,u suckin dicks makes me sick
Talkin bout me on RV cuz u miss me, I hate you ya punk bitch!
Tried to child custody over me, mom won the trial, no forsakening
the courts wanted to save a child from a abusive anal rapping
Grew up all my life wishen you where dead,wish u where never there
Memories of you wearing tight shirts n little skirts, it just isnt fair
Homies like me dont have fathers, they just despice them all
when you get right down to it, middle fingers to the sky FUCK YOU ALL


lol quick reply
to maRVJay1009 armada is my son diss

R Stylez 04-07-05 12:25 PM

dis was iight...dats all i really gotta say cuz yall battlin so afta tha battle we'll know who betta, i guess...return tha fava in my OM...link in sig

Armada Da 187 04-07-05 05:34 PM

thx for the feed fam did it really quick before i had to switch classes


upppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

p4ntzistheish 04-07-05 08:05 PM

no offense but you can tell this was quick lol...not the worst but far rom the best....decen tflow, decent structure decnteverything....7/10 rtf at any link in my sig....

Armada Da 187 04-07-05 09:08 PM

thx for the feed uppppiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

villagepimp 04-07-05 09:11 PM

you can tell that these people replying are all herbs and you're not very good.

Stop wasting your time on Disses in Open mic... battle the faggit.

4/10... jesus god I thought you were better than that.

Armada Da 187 04-08-05 02:12 PM

lol come on fam took like 8 minutes in its a reply to his piss poor diss


thx fo leavin feed though

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-08-05 03:19 PM

vp is right,...if ya gonna bother droppin something try n make sure its solid
this was definately a verse that shouldnt have even been posted...no hate
just being honest..aint no1 wanna read something you half assed...pz

~Lady Fiya~ 04-08-05 03:19 PM

this diss wasn't real strong... you were talkin bout anal raping, i mean you can come harder than you did, you were just making stretched statements no punches in any part of that, just crit... take it or leave it, but you gotta come harder to j than that, i think you know that tho.. so it's like
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Kawn Flixx 04-08-05 03:22 PM

Hmm this could have been alot better...
Really wasnt feeling it ..
Most of the "disses"
Really werent hitten hard, if your tryin to diss someone
try to use hard punchlines , some personals ...
not just some created stuff...
overall it could have been alot better, seen alot better from you
really wasnt feeling this piece.. but keep it up

Armada Da 187 04-09-05 06:47 PM

fams come on i didnt even try i jus replied ot his piss poor diss lol cvom eon this is more a comical diss lol


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