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R Stylez vs Yung Wun
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8 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting dont bitch ova votes g'd luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 04-08-05 at 01:54 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
R Stylez has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 01:59 PM.
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ayo...check dis out...
all dis nigga wanna do is "piss" but his lyrics are "shit" so what are u? r.kelly?..cuz 80% of dis site is kids* excuse ya back?..how can u if u lookin towards tha front oops..my bad, u aint wack..u jus a bleedin cunt** bastard ass guy offerin a mill as a prize to win a battle but i dont want it cuz it aint enuff for ya net life to be dismantled*** i bet u looked at my posts..got a notebook and grabbed a pen but ya prewritten flows wont get u no where cuz u got exposed afta i checked in**** dis battle is simple..jus lace up a line and a punch to get a bar and when people read ya shit they'll realize theres harder "punches" at "teen bars"***** what would ya momma say if she found out dat u was secretly rue paul dressin in drag..has been username and all****** i'll stop dis verse right here..probably off tha scale but whateva if ya mouth is as big as ya bladder u could have tha most money eva******* lmfao ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *=his profile...all he say is "pissin on u"...and r.kelly pissed on kids **=his sig say "excuse my back wack mcs", im callin him wack...but i say he aint wack, he jus a cunt (a pussy) ***=he offered my 1mill if i beat him...im killin his net life so 1mill aint enuff ****=i think he gone prewrite...im tellin yall he prewrittin his flow *****=a line and punch is a bar...and punch is all they got at teen bars, lmao ******=he a drag queen, what would momma say?...tha name "yung wun" is tha name of dat wack ass nigga from Ruff Ryders *******="off scale" i only got 7 bars...he always pissin so his bladder gotta be big, so if his mouth dat big he can make money suckin dick ------------------------------------------ hope i explained it right...vote now... :thumbup: |
Yung Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 02:59 PM.
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I Step To The Podium; For My Openin-Statement, I'll Say I'm Potent-Wit-Great-Grips, So I'm Chokin-This-Fake-Bitch/
Who's OutSpoken-With-Haste,-Which Earns A Token-For-Face-Lifts...And'll Leave Ya Fuckin Stomach Smokin-From-Eight-Clips!/ I'm The Pure Essence Of Talent; I Don't See A Speck-In-Ya-Rhymes, styles Should "Hook Up Wit A Clock" Just To "Get-Wit-The-Times"/ Here's A Lesson-Of-Mine, Dawg, I'm The Best-Wit-The-Lines...You Aint Got The "Big Guns Like P.Diddy" So You Ain't "Set-Up-To-Shine"!/ I've Heard The Speeches-of-Several, My Heat-Is-Incredible, Faggots Put Up Their Defenses, The Breaches-Are-Plentiful/ Whenever Rappers Comin At Me; They Get Sprayed-Wit-A-Round, I Don't Mean "Sex On The Floor" But You'll Get "Laid-On-The-Ground"/ I'm A "Hunter" Wit Mad "Game"; Ya Got Ya "Neck Sliced-"In-This-Brawl, So I'm Thinkin "This Bear's Head'll Look Nice-On-My-Wall!"/damn HeAt Up Dude... I'm Lyrical-Wit-Sick-Spits, This Basic Member Sparks-Leavin-Gays-Phased! It's A "Miracle"!-This-Kid's-"Whipped"! And I Ain't Talkin-Bout-"Mayonnaise"!/ I Put This Herb-In-His-Place, For Him Defeat's-A-Must! I'm Way Ahead Of You, I'll "Throw Dirt-In-Ya-Face" So "Eat-My-Dust!"/ It's So Dumb-To-Challenge-Me, I'm A Veteran,-azz! Ya Too Stunned-Of-Talent-G! You Ain't Even Better-Than-Half!/ Its over |
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Voted For: R Stylez
damn nice battle from both props to boht on that R gets the vote due to more complex personals. Flow from both of you was on point Structure was a lil shaky for boht but it was ight Multies- I didnt really see any Personals_ given it to R i didnt see any personals in youngs verse if there was they wernt that hard R elevate on ya punches ya personals got you this one but make ya punches harder. young use sum personals n ya verse like i said b4 if u did they didnt hit cuz i didnt evn notcie on I like how r got into Youngs profile n made personals so that gets him the vote not hatin nor dickridin, jus votin tryin to get some of these battles closed up return the fav battles below sig good ballte holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Yung Wun
Flow: Blah Punches: Yungwun Personals: Rstyles Wordplay: Yungwun Metas: Yungwun Multis: Yungwun Enjoyment: Blah Vote: Yung Wun ExplanatioN : Yung wun got this good multis peiced together with some good punches .. rstylez was just a lil too basic .. ight battle .. stay elevating .. stay up .. 1 .. and please return the favor guys and drop an honest vote on my battles Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for R Stylez
i wasnt really feelin wun's verse...RS shit had tha personals which is always a plus...g'd luck RS...but im only gone post feedback...stay up fam
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This was feedback posted for Yung Wun
can't vote on this battle, so jus checkin polls...
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lol@armada not seeing multis.......................
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