The Black Plague vs (Jimmy Pocketz)
 

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Win by 3-0 KO

The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 03:47 PM.

Homo nigga, when u get Gay porn Email u masterbate, tell mz Troop she can wait*
She look familiar… I seen her in my lil sisters class, and my sister in 3rd grade
Weak ass nigga… only time you feelin ‘tight’ is when ya dick is up in her hole
R Kelly tendancies, likin younger chicks like the dude that married Anna Nicole
Erogant pretty boy, but proud of what? U pay chicks to say “U look nice enuff”**
But why ya face at the bottom of ya pics? Cuz you so ugly, ya reflection ducks
Ripped you once already, but you greedy for losses so you tried to rematch me
When 9th offered up his dick for free rides, you went and told him “attatch me”
Lost once but you comin back for 2nds like ex-anorexics in old country buffet***
hungry for losses, takin 2 from plague, ya rec in debts RV money can’t pay

*Posted pics of his girl "mz troop"... bitch looked about 11
**Always postin pics of himself in Mugs hopin for good fem feedback
***Ex-annorexics would be hungry since they aint ate in a while, so they'd be comin back for seconds

(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 01:38 PM.

Dudes been here months before Me.Still garbage on the Realness
Over Played ya Plague Page.Gotta fake Black jus 2 Claim Illness
The Race was Never Great 4 Plague...Basically sticks in ya Place
Black..... couldnt Lick or Spit Shit if Fluids Toosh was in ya Face
This Caucasian Patient is Fakein Thug hes here 2 DeNigger Spots
Workin at Dominos.. was the Last time Black ..."Delivered Hots"
If you Let em Tell hes From "Hells Relm" ...."Somebody Belt Em"
Blacks Lyrix remind me of Abstinent Breast..."Nobody Felt Em"

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Voted For: The Black Plague

This was a pretty decent battle but i think black just came alot harder..

Black
IP:


Homo nigga, when u get Gay porn Email u masterbate, tell mz Troop she can wait*
She look familiar… I seen her in my lil sisters class, and my sister in 3rd grade
lol, decent could have been worded better
Weak ass nigga… only time you feelin ‘tight’ is when ya dick is up in her hole
R Kelly tendancies, likin younger chicks like the dude that married Anna Nicole
First line was hot , then it died
Erogant pretty boy, but proud of what? U pay chicks to say “U look nice enuff”**
But why ya face at the bottom of ya pics? Cuz you so ugly, ya reflection ducks
Hah, nice
Ripped you once already, but you greedy for losses so you tried to rematch me
When 9th offered up his dick for free rides, you went and told him “attatch me”
LOL, nice really feeling this
Lost once but you comin back for 2nds like ex-anorexics in old country buffet***
hungry for losses, takin 2 from plague, ya rec in debts RV money can’t pay
Nice , closer ..could have been worded alittle better

Troop
Dudes been here months before Me.Still garbage on the Realness
Over Played ya Plague Page.Gotta fake Black jus 2 Claim Illness
Decent opener
The Race was Never Great 4 Plague...Basically sticks in ya Place
Black..... couldnt Lick or Spit Shit if Fluids Toosh was in ya Face
Okay, could have been alot better
This Caucasian Patient is Fakein Thug hes here 2 DeNigger Spots
Workin at Dominos.. was the Last time Black ..."Delivered Hots"
Could have been better , decent
If you Let em Tell hes From "Hells Relm" ...."Somebody Belt Em"
Blacks Lyrix remind me of Abstinent Breast..."Nobody Felt Em"
Ha nice closer

Overall- this was a pretty close battle but black just came harder in my point of view, he had harder personals and better punchlines , both came good , troops stucture was alot better , black lines were alittle stretched but were hitten hard... overall keep it up

vote- Black plaque
RTF in the battle w/ Newkid plz

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Voted For: The Black Plague

Ah Close Match:

Black Plague:

Punches Were Ok..Seen Betta From U..The First Like Two Bars Were Str8 Garbage Fam..No Lie..But Ur Wordplay Picked Up..Decent Syllable Count..Nice Flow..Structure Was Decent..Closer Was A Bit Off Flow..But Was An Effective Punch None-The-Less..

Jimmy Pocketz

Seen Way Betta From You..Guess U Took Kid Lightly Or Sumfin..Ur Opener And Closer Were Ur Best Punches By Far..Dominoes Shit Is Type Played Fam..Flow Was Consistent..Structure Was Good..But Your Punches Compared To Black Plague's Were Mediocre Man..

Vote- Black Plague..Punches Won It..

Voted For: The Black Plague

black:
Homo nigga, when u get Gay porn Email u masterbate, tell mz Troop she can wait*
She look familiar… I seen her in my lil sisters class, and my sister in 3rd grade
^^^GOOD PERSONAL..BUT GRADE & WAIT DONT RYHME U FORCE DAT
Weak ass nigga… only time you feelin ‘tight’ is when ya dick is up in her hole
R Kelly tendancies, likin younger chicks like the dude that married Anna Nicole
^^^DECENT
Erogant pretty boy, but proud of what? U pay chicks to say “U look nice enuff”**
But why ya face at the bottom of ya pics? Cuz you so ugly, ya reflection ducks
^^^LMAOO FUNNY SHIT GOOD PERSONAL
Ripped you once already, but you greedy for losses so you tried to rematch me
When 9th offered up his dick for free rides, you went and told him “attatch me”
^^LMAOOOOOOO..FUNNY
Lost once but you comin back for 2nds like ex-anorexics in old country buffet***
hungry for losses, takin 2 from plague, ya rec in debts RV money can’t pay
^^^WEAK
jimmy:
Dudes been here months before Me.Still garbage on the Realness
Over Played ya Plague Page.Gotta fake Black jus 2 Claim Illness
^^^NAH...WACK OPENER FAM
The Race was Never Great 4 Plague...Basically sticks in ya Place
Black..... couldnt Lick or Spit Shit if Fluids Toosh was in ya Face
^^^WASN'T FEELIN DIS AT ALL
This Caucasian Patient is Fakein Thug hes here 2 DeNigger Spots
Workin at Dominos.. was the Last time Black ..."Delivered Hots"
^^^IVE SEEN 2 MANY DELIVER PUNCHES...BUT DIS WAS AIGHT
If you Let em Tell hes From "Hells Relm" ...."Somebody Belt Em"
Blacks Lyrix remind me of Abstinent Breast..."Nobody Felt Em"
^^^OKAY CLOSER...

V/BLACK...HE HAD A MORE ENJOYABLE VERSE...SOME FUNNY SHIT AND JIMMY U HAD LIKE 1 HOTT LINE OUT YA WHOLE VERSE TRUE STORY...

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Aiite cool i'l drop a honest vote sometime tomorrow prolly..

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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

This battle was mad wack to me, but I kept reading because I liked the different styles. Normally when I read a battle, they both sound the same, but not this one. I gave my vote to (Jimmy Pocketz) because I felt he had a better style to work with, and it was more simple. Sometimes being simple works, and he showed it in this one. His verse was easy to read, because his flow was on point. Not too many hard hitting punchlines in this one, or personals, it all came down to flow and structure, and I think (Jimmy Pocketz) got it. My vote goes to (Jimmy Pocketz).

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