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Spoken Prophecy 04-08-05 12:44 AM

supreme Clientele!!
 
the competition is nonsense i pop shit randomly cuz u faggots be spittin shit thinkin its ill knowin that they pre written sentences actually ill damage ya whole faculty u blast at me aim to kill cuz i kill when i aim u niggas is lame like 1 leg and a wooden cane spoke withstood ya flames
without a hair harmed fuck with spoke u fair warned im the best that did it u flex with it keep ya ears alert cuz death alarms........
ahem..ahem im ready now!!



ayo Spoke crackin fools wit gats across there back
until there spinal withers
Yall starin at a vet meanwhile im "tearing down the net" like
NCAA title winners!
check my grand hustle yall still in baby strollers im a pimp with the cane..
.heres the fullcourt press plus ya press for success
so pray that ball bouces your way before the clock ticks away!..
u kids was built to play but spoke retired from games
u lames should be ashamed of ur insane accusation thinkin ur the greatest
while im Hall a Fame court side announcing ur mistakes!
Spokell make a Mason chew concrete bite brick and shit plaster
On this forum i stay steppin on a yall toes every 5 mins like bad dancers!
fuck ya feelins U ran into bad luck if aint got me shillings
cuz im known to "serve more bitches over the net" than Serena williams!
Plus Ritalin cant stop my moves a Blackout cant stop my views
yall pass out when that mack out but im like the news cant stop my shoot!
who want it?!? my skills kill and i flaunt it when i taunt kids..
Spoke into verbal potty trainin
but i got "diapers for the mouths" of kids who talk Shit!
Bitch what fuck sit ups i hit a liqour store 4 my six packs get drunk sit back
and watch u niggas "struggle with Bars" like fat kids doing chinups!
Ive always been a troublesomed man u niggas "blueprint ya writs" but ill fuck up ya plans!
Most yall niggas Done and Damned Spoke spread love with tha Heckla like Son of Sam!
ill blast my way through any problem let the six revovle 'em to blood paint there bapes
bullet riddle there cranial and shape there face evolve there thoughts to they play like Apes!

Spoken Prophecy 04-08-05 12:57 PM

uppin...............4........... feed

Charlie~Manson 04-08-05 01:03 PM

This is a hot one i like the way u come off this one and the lil intro and u had some dope punchlines is there 2 so keep doin what u do man ~respect

Spoken Prophecy 04-08-05 04:24 PM

thanx for the reply homie!!!

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-08-05 04:37 PM

ummmmm....ok.......
 
if you refined your technique and structure this could be a good piece
i was gettin ya meta's n all but ya had alot of uneeded gibberish in between ..
work on ya slant ryhmin cuz it fell off consistently...
overall though it was aight..........stay up..keep droppin.....
PLEASE RETURN THA FAVOR......
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change ya font or text size cuz its a bitch ta follow at tymes...pz

Spoken Prophecy 04-08-05 10:12 PM

yeah....ok..........

Spoken Prophecy 04-10-05 05:36 AM

uppin....................................


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