Shadow
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/msdramaqueenmusic.htm

Just started so don't be expecting too much but I figured I might as well drop this one...

DQ

I'm likin this...your emotion is coo...stick a sock ova ya mic...lyrically its nice, create a lot of images and you use metaphors nicely...i was likin dis, cud have dun wid a intro n outro even if it is spoken word..keep em comin!! :thumbup:

RTF on moi n mad dogs song in song forum - rhymin madness

^Thanks ;) :thumbup:

I'll return the favor as soon as possible but remember I have no speakers on this comp so I burn cds with tracks on them, listen to them on laptop and then give feedback so it might take couple of days (sowwy).

DQ

listening to it right now.. nice beat.. hmmm.. your voice does go with the beat and nice accent ;) lol.. lyrics is good, good emotion.. but the quality is not as good as it should be.. its sorta short but its cool so i don't have to listen to it long.. overall.. its a good piece.. not as bad as u sed it was gonna be lol..
7/10

"its sorta short but its cool so i don't have to listen to it long"
^wtf?

Puh, you meanie :( I am so hurt right now! But thanks for feed you sexually obsessed and corrupting individual!

DQ

My bad I forgot about this.
I'll drop some feed tomorrow. Promise :)

No prob, there's no rush whatsoever :)

DQ

hmm. Quality was trash. Not sure if you had an effect on it, or if the recording environment and hardware were jsut that bad, but it makes for clarity issues. There's also someone occasionally going "uh" on the track too, lol. The lyrics were pretty okay. I've heard tons of tracks that discuss love and things of the sort so something new about love and broken hearts and so on aren't something that's new to me personally. The beat was pretty ambient which helped, but I think you'd have made out better with a condenser with some reverb and echo.

^Lmao, didn't notice the "uh" before. I know the quality is awful but if you'd see with what I'm working over here...

The "mic" I have is one of those tiny things attached to speakers, they use those in offices quite often. But I'm getting a new one soon though so hope quality will be better then. Was my first try so I didn't expect it to be any better :)

Thanks for feed btw

DQ

yea u let me peep this before u posted it ma'...well lyrically it was def. very good....u surprised me with how u described yourself...the imagery was great...that beat was corny but it fit this track somehow cuz it had a uniqueness to it.....ya quality wasn't that bad better than I expected but still needs work....but decent drop..stay up...1

^Thanks, feed is much appreciated!

DQ

I'll try to ignore the quality...Anyway, beat is decent...But that really doesnt matter...Your lyrics were good...The image you potrayed was good...this sounds like one of those old commercials where they spit a poem about perfume or some shit...lol...The topic is ehhh, maybe try something different next time...because these kind of topics are very overdone...and next time try to put more emotion into some parts of the poem to catch your listeners attetion more...because this started to get real repititive quick...but you did good on this nonetheless...keep at it...good drop...

Return the favor...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186354

Thanks for feed man, was my first audio stuff so I'm definitely working hard to get better and all this feed helping me out for sure

DQ

Some good shit.... I'll keep the nice things short
Beat, lyrics, voice, I liked these all
I can tell ya mic is poor, which makes ya quality bad
Emotion was OK, but when ya talked sounded like you were either calm or were sad
I dont do a lotta these tracks, spoken word I mean..
But my advice is dont start ya verses and speak with the same tone permanently
Try to change it up on an occasional basis,
But i dunno, maybe ya mic aint able to pick up subtle voice changes.
Other than that, and ya quality, nothing was wack
And it wouldnt be a bad thing if you were to flood us with tracks.

^Word thanks for the feed, it was first thing I EVER recorded so didn't pay attention to changing tone or whatever haha. I urgently have to redo this but thanks yo :thumbup: