Jon Shells vs warrior
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-09-05 at 02:40 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Jon Shells has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 08:51 PM.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:52 PM.

Let’s get straight to the point don’t got time to water ya./
Just exposing fake thugs, in his case a fake Warrior./ (1)

Hard on the outside, inside soft like and Oreo./
He tried out for The Top Model show, he showed me his Portfolio./ (2)

And who ever gased him, over charged him./
Now he’s hungry for a win, Shells gon over starve him./ (3)

Ya secret is you wanna be a singer, but you settle for rapping./
You wanna tell ya crew but don’t know what would happen./ (4)

I’m hot dog, you still trying to Catch up./
Shells Hot Dog leave ya shirt red like Ketchup./ (5)

Shells Backed up by Steel Heaters./
I’ma turn ya “Warriors” to my personal Cheerleader’s./ (6)

The New Guy of the Mafia, the Kid Next./
Selling Weed the same color of a Piss Test./ (7)

Shot you in the leg, make ya bitch drink my piss test./
Throw ya bitch on you so ya’ll can get a little kiss test./ (8)

check it,

i tend~to~win~fights, take a stab im bendin~ya~knife/
u like a fallin soldier, the way "war's" endin~ya~life/

u either brave or stupid, most herbs would refuse~to~respond/
im shittin on shell's, i guess u could say im usin~the~'jon'/

RV's losin a pawn, yall eggin him on, im X'ing~him~out/
cause im the type to waste shell's like im eggin~ya~house/

more wordplay on ya name then u got in ya whole~weak~verse/
im gon be the winner(winter) so im endin ya career like u sold~T-shirts/

i take it easy on herbs to give em hope/
leavin "jon" dead like this kids the pope/
bitch im dope, u better pray to God u get a vote/

good luck

Voted For: warrior

vote goes to warrior because jon shells went over the line limit

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

upppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn for votes.....................

I didn't go over my limit I Onlt spit 8 bars, what kind of vote is that....Shit is lame (Line Limits)

That's the only way niggas beat me any way is by DQ (Over line limits this suppose to be a battle I never even heard of a line limit...)

lmao yo its all good son i can ask strobe to remove that vote cause i aint like it either.

uppin for some mutha fuckin explained votes come on people get to votin

uppin............................................. ...

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This was feedback posted for Jon Shells
 

Chekkin Tha Polls.................................

Voted For: Jon Shells

Lol i vote for jone coz His verse hit harder wit da punches, their werent much between em but he just took it. I liked da concept of da ketchup line but dont like it when lil internet rappers start talking bout guns, it dun work homie same goes for warrior who's verse was practically all about how his gunna shoot you n shit, tiss all talk so next time get some better concepts. Jon i liked that cheerleader line also lol made me laugh, so this was a ite battle just keep it up. peace

1-0 good explanation...

I'm still stuck on the lines issue, rappers spit bars...actors recite lines...get it together M.C. so if this says battle i'm spitting bars...2 lines together (That's a Bar) I been spitting for long enough to know the differnece...

Uppin....

wow good vote homie but next time know wut ur talkin about lol i aint say one thing about shootin him wit a gun lmao but hey maybe u was readin something else. aight that 1-0 ur way lets get some more votes