illest freestyler vs Majestic
 

Battle Rules:

10 -15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

spit only once

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-08-05 at 10:33 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

illest freestyler has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:08 PM.

Majestic has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:19 PM.

heres a bitch named Majestic/ his flow is gonna be weak and bony like he anorexic/dawg if i am wrong please correct-this/ cuz but i ma murder Majestic/ wearin elastic/ gloves and bury his ass in tha atlantic/ ocean.....his verse is gonna sink like what happned to tha titanic/ this bitch is gonna go frantic/when he reads this verse/ cuz its gonna put a curse/ into his body thay nurse/ cannot cure...this is gonna be a real battle like when ken norton broke tha jaw of muhammad ali/ so bitch get on yo knee/ and plead fo mercy/dawg rhymin against me will leave yo ass on tha streets singin T.I. "U don't Know Me"/so i ma leave tha rest of tha lines empty/ cuz whoopin yo ass in a battle iz easy as hell for me/

^^shiit it had 12 lines when i read tha post............

dont need to wait for no show votes, cuz ima seek you n serve
you dont feel hurt from my punches cuz they deaden your nerves
like a dogs scent to smell, tt seems ya face is keen to punches
youll leave in krutches, like cardboard computers you only seem to function
ur verse didnt rhyme u gotta try harder next time but all in all ur verse was so so/
the only win in your record is probally from a no show
my ryhmes are hot and will burn you like the earth's core
the only chainsaw this kid could produce is from a hardware store

fucking bitch you gave me 15 minutes, so im only givin u 8 lines, uppin

^^ hey bitch i only got 15 minutes also u fuckin loser

Voted For: Majestic

polls dey both wak n e way but who winnin dis shit

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but 15 minutes isnt long enough to write a decent verse..... bump

yo dawg thats aunexplained vote man...u gots to explain yo vote

This was feedback posted for illest freestyler
 

wack battle, just by looking at the structure. I'm not voting on this...sry

Voted For: Majestic

majestic- ya through 1 decent punch from what i seen(2nd bar) the rest were so so...i didnt get that closer....enlighten me later.....overall you had ok structure except for that long ass stretched bar...that through ya whole verse off from there on...try not to do that homie.......
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illest-not a very good verse at all..actually it was plain wack..fix ya satructure...dont use///...n match your syllable count when ya writing ya bars..you need to elevate alot..no hate...just being honest.......

thank you for the votes, uppin this..................................

Voted For: Majestic

AIGHT MAJESTIC dope punches good flow good structure
overall good battle verse
illest ok punches,flow was way off,structure was way off over all not a good battle verse dog work on structure and flow