the kid 523 vs speatsbeats
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
no d/r


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-11-05 at 10:33 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:34 PM.

SpeatsBeats has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:39 PM.

Your so wack, you should PM your whole verse to me to avoid embarrassment
Because you know my words will "Massacre" you just like 50 Cent
Your the type of emcee who has to bold his lines for people to see your rhymes
You probally need dentures from always bitin them lines
Stop rappin, your loose lines you need to tighten
This rookie first posted his verse in ImageTitan
He must be confused, thinkin he gona win when he always gonna lose
Because just like Mr.T, "I pitty this fool"
So fuck this battle 10 lines and i fuckin merked you
After this battle is over, ill sell this verse to you

How does it feel to have a dick in ur ass and sitting down
Is that the reason ur always screemin ur dumb lyrics out loud?/
How wack can you be when your gettin cut for M.O.B*
Damn its a shame,id kill myself....oops sorry the kid 523/
Im helpin him elevating,teacher VS Student**
My bad,stupid question,i won,it was to evident/
He think hes dope,hes gettin votes from newbys
People who knows nothing,people whos still lost in RV/
I didnt use tecniks,,i was tired so fell asleep on the keyboard
My respiration touched the buttoms,even my nose was bored/

* hes maybe gettin cut from MOB
** he was to wack so i pmed him to help him,maybe hes better now

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

the kid lost fair and square lmao mr T lines are wack outta this world lmao.....anywaysspeats structure was way better speats had an overall better verse.....kid needs to work on structure and better wordplay nuff sed vote goes to speats

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Voted For: the kid 523

wow this battle was pretty wakc.......but the kid earns my vote.............speats personals were so wack...his first one wasnt even confirmed so thats gay..and ur second one..if he pm'ed u for heelp it wouldve been better but he didnt...anyways..the kid had more punches than speats.....

vote-the kid 523

This was feedback posted for SpeatsBeats
 

Checkin The Polls On This Battle..Speats Won Though

This was feedback posted for the kid 523
 

checkin dem polls....... tight verse 523!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

checkin polls....i won............................

fuckk u speats.. u sayin u won its tied.. n we both got the same exact feedback

haha .............................................