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LethGod

04-09-05 10:48 PM

Patriarchal

Broken
Smashed
Shattered
Cracked
Damaged
Tortured
Tormented
Wretched
Betrayed
Ignored
Abandoned

I was all these thing until I
Killed the old weaker me and
Evolved into myself……………

Bangalore

04-10-05 12:56 AM

this was simple yet elegant in many ways i liked it for being so simple...nice

Sweft

04-10-05 07:22 PM

wow, i never seen a poem like this! (LoL) simple but I like it..

late

sweft

LethGod

04-10-05 07:50 PM

Thanks for the feedback..

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