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Newkid vs Bonecollector
Battle Rules:
10 - No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting blind spit like u asked 4 Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 04-10-05 at 12:11 AM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
Newkid has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 11:48 PM.
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da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector' no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector' 'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz' 'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ' act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz' 'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn' you trash family.............cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit' u lyin bitch...............dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt' hiz name bonecollector good timez was n chicago he live durr jay jay said 'DYNOMITE!' n philly we call each otha 'bullz' he liv n chicago n da chicago bball team iz da bullz chicago nikk name iz chi-town he asked 4 da battle 2 b a blind spit he a crip durr colorz iz blue n he type on da comp |
dam i fukked up da last part o well im not gettin paid 4 it dis how it should of been
da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector' no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector' 'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz' 'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ' act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz' 'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn' you trash family......cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit' u lyin bitch.......dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt' hiz name bonecollector good timez was n chicago he live durr jay jay said 'DYNOMITE!' n philly we call each otha 'bullz' he liv n chicago n da chicago bball team iz da bullz chicago nikk name iz chi-town he asked 4 da battle 2 b a blind spit he a crip durr colorz iz blue n he type on da comp |
Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 12:09 AM.
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When it comes to beatin the best Bonez punches'll capsize Ya Chest..
Cus i'll punch New kid in his abdoman , and give him cardiac arrest.. This new kid's from philly? guess you think you got it rough? cus u aint tuff,but you can drop ya best and that still wont be enough... Kido i Think its past ya bed time , time to put you to rest... might i suggest ?that you quit now cuz me to you aint no contest.. I Could kill u Wid Rite Jabz..But Ill Go Easy and Chose Left.. Cuz Like Stevie Wonder ill Damage ya Ears N Leeve Yu Mos Def.. Cus You think you'll live but you aint gonna survive... Cuz aint jesus christ so there aint no way you gonna come back alive |
Voted For: Bonecollector
Aight Check It.. BoneCollector: 6/10 You Had Some Nice Punches..but Not Too Many Personals. The Structure Was A Little off, but The Reading Content Wasn't Bad. The Vocab Wasn't Too Bad, Originality Was There In Some Bars. NewKid: 4/10 I Wasn't Feeling The Structure First Off, but You Had A Decent Punch or Two. You Lacked A Lot of Originality and Personals Throughout Ya Verse. The One You Tried Was A Weak Ass Bar..Bout Him Grabbin His Own Skeleton...Not Feeling It. Vote: Bonecollector: For Better Punches and Overall Battle Verse. ~R~ |
This was feedback posted for Newkid
this was a real weak battle......
newkid..........those periods fucked ya verse... . bones....man..stop starting sentences with CUZ... . pz |
^LOL :( , why cant i use Cus its my word
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Voted For: Bonecollector
da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector' no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector' weak punch here 'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz' 'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ' eh, kinda played here act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz' almost decent 'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn' okay, could’ve made the punch harder you trash family.............cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit' u lyin bitch...............dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt' nope, weak punch here When it comes to beatin the best Bonez punches'll capsize Ya Chest.. Cus i'll punch New kid in his abdoman , and give him cardiac arrest.. nah, punch wasn’t hard here This new kid's from philly? guess you think you got it rough? cus u aint tuff,but you can drop ya best and that still wont be enough... decent Kido i Think its past ya bed time , time to put you to rest... might i suggest ?that you quit now cuz me to you aint no contest.. seems like I seen this line somewhere, but it was aight I Could kill u Wid Rite Jabz..But Ill Go Easy and Chose Left.. Cuz Like Stevie Wonder ill Damage ya Ears N Leeve Yu Mos Def.. nope Cus You think you'll live but you aint gonna survive... Cuz aint jesus christ so there aint no way you gonna come back alive Eh, decent here Nk - …punches were okay, most of them could’ve been harder Flow lacked here, seemed u kept stretching it all the way till the End, vocab needs help, but overall, ur drop was okay Bc - …punches were decent here, ur flow was aight, the structure Was decent & not stretched like nk’s…vocab was aight, basically You came harder in this battle here though, no hate Rtf though Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Bonecollector takes this shit easily... Newkid- Man stop bringin the E-Thug shit.. cuz it dont work on computers.. i couldn't understand half of ya verse, cuz u typin like you would talk, and i can't understand what u sayin.. Decent opener from you tho, prolly ya best line.. After that u went downhill.. the Hoodz Crime line was aiite, but again, this aint the real world so bringin gansta online shit wont work, stop talkin about bein thuggish online..Most of ya bars was like that, and it brought ya verse down.. You need to bring more punches, and come wit some persoanals cuz u had none in ya whole verse.. and definately bring some wordplay and complexity next time, and you'l be aiite..No hate dawg jus elevate.. Bonecollector-Decent verse here, obvious you came half assed... Opener was kinda played, and so was the next bar... The bed time line was nice, enough to win u the battle rite there... And the stevie wonder line was a lil played, but it was a Stevie line i never heard tho so it was pretty nice.. Closer was good too.. again, kinda played wit the Jesus line, but a decent bar still.. Good wordplay in ya verse, and nice punches.. coulda had some personals, and a lil more wordplay, but u still won it off punches... Overall, Collector easily takes this with harder punches and complexity to his verse.. Newkid you jus need to bring some worldplay and better punches/personals to your verses... V/Bonecollector |
Voted For: Newkid
newkid: da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector' no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector' ^^^^GOOD OPENER N PLAY OFF HIS NAME 'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz' 'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ' ^^^^LOL I GOT IT BUT U WORDED DIS WRONG act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz' ^^^WHOO I LIKE DIS...I KNWO HOW PHILLY NIGGAZ CALL EACH OTEHR BULLS SO DAT WAS CLEVA 'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn' ^^^NAH you trash family.............cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit' u lyin bitch...............dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt' ^^^WEAK CLOSER FAM bone: When it comes to beatin the best Bonez punches'll capsize Ya Chest.. Cus i'll punch New kid in his abdoman , and give him cardiac arrest.. ^^^^WEAK OPENER This new kid's from philly? guess you think you got it rough? cus u aint tuff,but you can drop ya best and that still wont be enough... ^^^ANOTHER WEAK 1 FAM WHUTS GOOD?? Kido i Think its past ya bed time , time to put you to rest... might i suggest ?that you quit now cuz me to you aint no contest.. ^^^LOL DAT WAS NOOBISH I Could kill u Wid Rite Jabz..But Ill Go Easy and Chose Left.. Cuz Like Stevie Wonder ill Damage ya Ears N Leeve Yu Mos Def.. ^^^^STEVIE WONDER IS BLIND DOGG NOT DEAF Cus You think you'll live but you aint gonna survive... Cuz aint jesus christ so there aint no way you gonna come back alive ^^^WEAK CLOSER..... bone dissapointed me 4real...no creativity at all i mean u came real basic step ya shit up afat dis battle fam....n newkid da beginin of ya verse was good but da end got a lil weak but u had da betta verse |
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Voted For: Newkid
V/newkid.....this was a good battle but neww gets my vote he came wit good punchs that had good vocab an personals structure needs a little work ....bone u had a good drop but the some played lines the first bar played it seemed u came too lightly.....NO HATE RETURN THE FAVOR opener=n closer=tie structure=B punchs=n personals=n vocab=tie overall=Newkid..... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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