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efecx vs REDZONE
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-11-05 at 02:36 PM Must drop verse in 200 minutes after check in. |
REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 02:10 PM.
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efecx has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 02:34 PM.
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efecx outta respect I'll get cha merked wit tha tec...
threadin tha text, thez punches bring thunda at tha point of connect... leavin you wet, head ejectin like tha jack in tha box... strapped wit tha glocks, ya volunteered fa ya head ta be rocked... checkmate, ya style lame I've done peaked at cha flow... some1 speak fa this hoe, RV should ban you fa how weak that cha flow... but don't worry I'll be ya hero if ya mom's and pop's leave... RedZone holdin tha keys and still you gotta ' ask Jeeves'... answer ta me, takin no questions til ya betta ya lines... I don't kno how you live fa ya respect, but YOU will die fa mines... naw I didn't copy T.I. in tha last rhyme, I switched it up |
Voted For: efecx
Fecx had this shit... Redzone ur verse is aight..But not good to impress me.. Fecx=Structure Wordplay Punches Redzone=Structure GG GO AGAIN NEXT TIME ! |
Voted For: REDZONE
this was a pretty weak battle...........efeckx punches werent connectin...his vocab was weak...he had no mulits...and his wordplay was horrendous...work on that Redzones verse was garbage to....none of his bars were good and none of them connected...the only thing that seemed DECENT to me was the ask jeeves bar...it wasnt that good but iwas better than any other punvh in efecx verse....... vote-RedZone |
Voted For: efecx
Flow: Blah Punches: Neither Personals: Neither Wordplay: Neither Metas: Neither Multis: Neither ENjoyment: Blah Vote: efexc explanation: Eh both were eh no real punchlines here iono ef just edged it out and just wasnt completely bad iono http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185205 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=184957 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185213 return the favor plz and vote on my battles |
This was feedback posted for efecx
i like efecx'z verse becuz i luv da image he paintz in my mind...
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