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Honesty
Emotion
i need something to write about. this writers block is plaguing me the words just leave when i speak your note is filled with subtle pleas inspire me to create and love i'll contemplate and over react and in the end just to come clean i forgot to call but i swear i love you, damn it , you know what i mean i don't really mean that, its just there's something in your laugh i'll reassure you , don't hold back give you confidence where you lack looking for the honesty in your eyes i'll see more than what i expected if you want me to i'll sweep you off your feet pack tightly just to explain repeat the words again will you be mine?all i can convey your eyes follow as... as my hand grazes your face i enlist all my courage for what it is living in this moment sheltered from the high tide coming from what i witnessed it will take more this time as my eyes fall from yours every dream in my soul this for you i present this my... Honesty I KEPT THIS POEM SIMPLE...VOCAB INCLUDED...o yea lol check out my free writes to lol |
its not all together, but i seee the point your trying to make. Keep up the good work and read my song "Barbie Doll"
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So this is just random thought's made into a poem.. I didn't see like, what you were tryin' to stay. Try to be more complex and you need to work on your vocab. Over all is was an okay drop.. 6/10
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lol i kept the vocab simple on this one...ppl don't understand the big words lol but thanks
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