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Are You Gettin Dissed?-Who Knows..............
yea, itz ya boi Young Deuce aka Young Wood 'bout to blast on that ass nigga strap up homie Verse 1
I took 'OneStepForward' to put ya brains to ya shoes Ima keep it G, do like the Southside and give u niggaz tha bluez-* Lyrical Gangbanga, put them bar's to ya chest and if a nigga got a problem u kan find me in the Wild West If u really want beef then see me in tha streetz that nigga Konflictz got me throw'n LS til i die but he didnt no he was fuck'n wit a nigga from tha I 'J Dot' run'n hiz mouth like he got shit to say but wen that heat comes to spray he aint got shit to say I heard Jay-Z was a biter, well J's jus followin his idol yall sum pussies catch'n the flowers like Marital Recitals Emericaz Finest iz bacc? damn yall must be high cuz baseheads run tha streetz and ya boi might die Debit, u a bitch, come see me if u want ya face on ya lap and 20 Grand gotta be thirsty cuz hiz lips iz still chapped You 'Untraceable'? ha nigga u bitch-made and E.F. miss ma presence so they cut it witta switch-blade *Southside Crips-Bluez |
uppin dis shit yall................
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so is dis a diss track?...jus wonderin
-DB |
sort of
i aint got nuttin against u but itz wateva drop sum feed |
all ya concepts were played like a ten cent hoe...
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ur opinion iz not important so uppin dis shit
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"its whateva"...lmao
but bout tha track...its a solid diss...eventho its bout my nigga and my crew its still solid...i aint got nothin against u either but if my name comes up, im gone show up...believe dat -DB |
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..look in the lounge,alot of your punches were comments by vets..! im just saying ..be a lil more original...... :thumbup: |
ok Daz we koo
i thought u tryin to be 1 of those "Vets" who says dat shit everywere ma bad u no how it iz Doe uppin |
yea what Daz said...basically...btw WHY THE FUCK DOES EVERYONE HATE EMERICA'S FINEST! Ahh had to get that off of my chest lol
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Yo dis was an iight verse cuzz some good punches in there hit pretty good flow was a lil off in some places but it was iight i give dis a 7/10.......~1~ RTF on my OM call "FUCK E.F. (hot ass diss)"
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Uppin Dis Shit...............
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up Up Uppin Dis Shit
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Pump Pa Pump Pa Pump Pa Pump It Up
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This was an okay drop..like daz said please next time come alittle more origonal..
To start off your structure was off , next time try to match up your barz... Second try to make harder punchlines , that ppl havent heard before... Work on showing alittle more effort into your work... maybe some emotions to make .. it stand out.. overall it was a decent drop... could have been alot better.. if you use better wordplay, and elevate your vocab keep it up Drop a link to an OM' you have leftfeed back on or this will be closed |
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