another on that im tryin to improve check it out tell me whats good
 

i b lerically skilled i ain't afraid to kill your blood i will spill on the vest the stain you see still im on some dumbshit you bet i be poppin some bills i tell you again i ain't no stuart lil i'll strangle you with a pillow hit you with a bat like your head is a wiffle you won't hear no whistle i'll put you in a cradle my victory will be swift and fatal

tell me whats good yaw k thanx