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Jason 04-13-05 09:56 AM

Some More RV Member Diss
 
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=40233

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=40233

Xcell Running His Lip Like It Was The Energizer Bunny
I Owned Em In Two Lines With Just My Appetizer Dummy
This Bitch Gods Angel Still Yapping I Just Might Expose Em’
Treat Em’ Like Old Car Batteries Just Go And Dispose Em’
Mad Dog’s Audio Is Shit His Record? I Never Heard Of It
If His Audio Was Produced By Dia I Would Of Still Murder It
Out Scheme Schema Like Dream Works The Kid Still A Dreamer
If Mr. Clean Rapped With Em’ This Clown Couldn’t Spit Cleaner
Dj Em Sce Can’t Even Spell Let Alone Whipe His Own Ass Damn
He’s Bin On Rap Verse So Long That The Kid Can’t Even Pass Man
That Little Bitch Ass Will A Peer “Only My Friends Can Get Awards”
The Cunt Can Barely Rap Good, Let Alone Hit Any Of Her Cords
Hold Up, I’ll Fold Up Retro Buttion Like He Was A Pop Out Rug
Squash The Beef ? Naw But Leave You Squashed Like A Bug
Trauma You Know My Next Move So Just Be Prepared To Run
His Mouth Is His Ass Coz His Audio Is Shit, His Career Is Done
Da Vinci You Aint Dope, I’d Poke A Hole Into Your Little Throat
How You Finna Spit Now? 16-0? Soon You Won’t Be Able To Gloat
Fuck Every Crew Who Ever Took Me Of There Side, Off The Roster
What You Do Comes Back On You Two Times, That There Cost Ya
Stanza Popping His Mouth, But The Faggot Got Banned For Cheating
Known As King Dipset? He Knew He Couldn’t Win So He Started Feeding
Peaches And Cream Is A Way To Describe These Names Aka Fuck Faces
Gaps And Spaces For Punches, Don’t Trip Yall Just Go And Tie Ya Laces

Jason 04-13-05 06:12 PM

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Jason 04-14-05 09:53 AM

Bumping This Shit Man...........

Pyronix 04-14-05 11:32 AM

wow, i really think you need da elevate.

M-Eazy 04-14-05 12:18 PM

Good shit. 7/10 for me.

Jason 04-16-05 01:04 AM

Thanks J Dot, Pyronix You A Thief

Germ 04-16-05 01:07 PM

meh, too basic, nothing really special in it....flow and structure were on point, but like i said, too plain, nothing stood out

Kawn Flixx 04-16-05 02:29 PM

Blah, alittle to simple for me ... lines were just basic..
Punchlines were there but they werent hitten hard..
You personals were okay, but alittle to simple to catch my attention..
structure was good , nice way to dress up your verse , and bold ppls names..
overall it was an okay drop seen you do alot better... next time try to be alittle more
complex , w/ your verse...and use better wordplay, and elevate your vocab


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