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Pyronix vs MaRVJay1009
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8 lines.. No Crew Votes.. No Recycling.. No Biting.. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 04-13-05 at 02:31 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Pyronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 02:03 PM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 02:22 PM.
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another alias homo.....
dis fag made an alias da BaTTLE NOOBS cuzz he sound real gay on a beat. its like u "talk 2 god with ya knee's on a calender" cuzz u "pray on da week". if i aint nice y u hate 4 chump?,dont get ya ass wiped and face all lump'd. give up y have a rap career when u "wont go far" like a "baseball bunt". pyronix u really boin marv,get off my dick do somthin go call a broad. u gon win dis battle? lol nope only "MJ u'll eva RIP" is a "jordan card".* matter go call ya squad..cuzz punches weak u like rocky in his first fight. u'll neva have $ ya "road da riches" gon be "shaky like ali on a dirt bike. *my initals r MJ..u'll get da rest |
Your rec's huge though, so I advise Marv to stop n lay low.
Marv's gettin the wind knocked out of him, better yet a tornado! I mean, over 30 wins? I guess, your text is getting kinda dull. And yeah, I am hitting rock bottom, punching the base of your skull. Don't questio nthe illest style, cuz I'm the best of sonning, while.. Your just a paedo, who attempted to molest his inner child. I told you your lacking fizz, ya get the voters gasps, sucker. But it's deff not in awe.....It's from RV's asthma sufferers. |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
marv got this cuz of his punches...nice closer...nice werdplay...good structure...couldve used some multies or improved vocab though pyronix, i wasnt impressed by this verse if u are an alias but the opener wasnt great and the closer was okay...good strucutre, but thats bout it for real...multies vocab flow and punches all cooodve been worked on in my opinion both cood work on multies and vocab v/marvjay1009 rtf.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...19&page=1&pp=15 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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why???....when u only got 30 post.....fam dat alias shit is gay 4real
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that vote wasnt really explained, but w/e.............upping
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come on with da votin shit...just accept it fam..........
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