Technical vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
3 votes=tko
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting




Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-13-05 at 11:26 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 11:21 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 11:25 PM.

LOOK...

tell em how long u been duckin marvjay,maybe its bcuzz ya bars gay.
wanna get TECHNiCaL? da ppl of rv should know dat ya alias is SLOBK.*
true!....whuts funny u say u da hottest rapper? i beg ya pardon.
afta dis lose you gon "leave da NET" faster than "kenyon martin".
aint u a crip well look ya borin cus,u dont wanna go da war with thugs.
fam i'll put ya "heart" on da floor then "push u in it" so u could "fall in luv".
must be on some drugs...u were a mistake but ya raps corny on purpose.
he thought "rap B.i.G" when he made dat dumb name 'notorious verses'.**
dis kid is fake,i'll twist ya fate they gon find his stupid ass in a lake.
if u aiNT Gay then y u mugshots tellin .k.onfliktz his pics is str8.***
i can make u feel slugz..u a backwards gangta hol up fam aint u still CUS?.
so y ya aim name BLOODCGaNGSTER & don't SLOBK mean u kill bloods?.****

*his alias is SLOBK
**his old name is notorious verse
***....and da link so u can see how gay he is.
****his aim name is bloodcgangster but on rv his name is slobk...a blood is a slob and da bk means blood killer..isn't dat a backwards gangster?

aight no lets get da votin popin

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this verse had alot more hotter punchlines and it had better flow both structures were okay and thought tenchnical came hot aswell but you didn't hit very hard wid some of your punchlines it was a good battle but my vote has to go to marvejay return the vote for my battle

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv....not a bad verse, didnt think it was your best, but i was feeling it, had a good flow and you kept it consistent through the whole verse, which is good, nothing really stood out that much, you were mainly doing personals, which is cool, but you still took this...structure a little off at times, but we all know what you're capable off, word....keep up man

technical....meh, had nothing special, you were trying wordplay, but it came off too basic and didn't really diss, like the opener....that was bunk.....friends with strobe? smells fake to me....closer was decent, had the best flow and structure too...i still think you're stretching your lines man....uh, nothing really stood out, you came too basic and thats why you aren't gettin my vote, alot of times your lines are just random statements....like the opening line, it was just a multi rhyme attempt...and the KLL line,,,,,yes, he is in a gimmick match set up by the mod? how is that a diss.......well, you still have room to elevate....no hate

v/marvjay1009....rtf in the sig if you could

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i was feelin this battle alot. yall both came wit some hot ish but i think marv took this battle wit some overwhelmin punches nah mean. i was feelin marv's flow more and he had some hot personals in there wit some good setups. plus, he had better multies and some nice creatives bars.
technical had some hot shit too but it wasn't enuff i wasnt feelin alot of his punches and the didnt connect as well as marv's in this battle.

technical's best bar=Be Serious..U Only Into These "Gimmick Matches"..Homie Let Da Foo Start..**
And The Only Time Peeps See "Jays" Is Playin Ball In Da School Yard..
^^ you would of prolly won if hte rest of ur bars were like this one, creative bar and nice diss nah mean

marv's best bar=
true!....whuts funny u say u da hottest rapper? i beg ya pardon.
afta dis lose you gon "leave da NET" faster than "kenyon martin".
^^sick bar homie lol shit was hot, nice set up and good delivery best bar of the battle

overall= tha punches and flow were the key joints in this battle, some ok multies but they didnt really affect the outcome, nor did vocab or none of that shit. basically marvs bars were just better all around but still a good battle
holla at me wit some honest votes
LINKs ARE IN THE SIG.....1

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

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