FLiPakaJR vs ethnic
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-17-05 at 11:13 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

FLiPakaJR has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 11:13 AM.

Ethnic has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 11:15 AM.

yo......yo.......yo........
His name is joke taked from Flipper and Lopaka*....
same with his lines burned like tobacca........
You make me puke bitch maybe you know this....
what a nightmare see you in beach of nudist.....
Hot punch lines,you try to kidding me???....
you laughtin me bitch like try to trhead on me...
shit this freak,its too easy take a victory....
Bitch you weak,get one punch thats a history.....
Your flow stucking like old granny talk without theet....
Your moms fucking like old bitch on the street.....
try to fuck her back like rainman without feet.....

*childs program

sorr i put too many lines.but i say you to put 6-unlimited lines...so thats not my foult....so lines be 6-unlimited.......

y0 check it
battle begun, left ethnic blooded by lyrical gat gunz
your Weak rhymez tired me like fat people in a fun-run//
but neva hide da factz i spit, cuz i know the truth really hurtz
swim in my fluid accent, you'll drown like one-armed captain kirk//
Take knifez and take your life, watch da devil be ur teacher
bitin rhymez online, your dat insect in those apple-computerz //

good..good...*cough*......lets get some votes..........

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Voted For: FLiPakaJR

ONE SIDED, breakdown:

Flip- nice structure and flow, some punches were kinda played...that one armd captain kirk shit made me laugh a lil your last line would've been betta if u setted it up but overall a nice drop kid

Ethnic- i followed ya link from da free agents thread, not a good battle on ur behalf, this is in my eyes ONE SIDED. Structure was ok but your flow lacked big time, sound like you didnt kno wat to say and this almost made me quit rappin:
Your moms fucking like old bitch on the street.....
try to fuck her back like rainman without feet.....
??

Overall- ONE SIDED, elevate^^^^^^^ Ethnic, no beef kause u reely dont want it, juss facts

This was feedback posted for FLiPakaJR
 

I just won't vote on this. You both need to elevate majorly. Just glancing at your verses, I could tell they was both wack, but then reading them. Damn. Elevate.

yo..........votes..................need more votes.......................

ou fuck..........i need still uppin this shit..........votes for get this shit close..........