Da King vs Bonecollector
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-14-05 at 10:19 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Da King has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 08:20 PM.

ya raps is tired, watch me melt ya dome
set dis *man on fire den send him to *collect his bones
i own da throne, man and you betta believe dis
while my respect growing like fetus
yo bitch on my dick like the tip of my penis
now dat's real talk so get use to dis
i'm sorry yo lyrics is strange i'm just not used to shit
so get back cuz the blast from my gat is hot son
***you say you sick but don't show it like magic johnson

*and**Denzel was in Man on Fire and Bone Collector
***Magic Johnson had aids but showed no symptoms

Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 09:23 PM.

Voted For: Bonecollector

bonecollector took this imo..he actually had punches....da king u just self glorified da whole time not really anything worth mentioning....BC you had some creative punches and vocab wasnt too bad....nice transfers between punches and shit....
v/bonecollector
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This was feedback posted for Da King
 

checking pollz...I think King had it...Nice battle yall...

Voted For: Da King

this battle wasnt as good as it cooda been but this is an upset ion my eyes:

BC-good:liked the sctructure...the opener and flow were alright
bad:seemed like all of your punches were just off of his name, the punches and werdplay were off bigtime...also coodve used multies and a WAY better closer

DK-good: the flow was okay and i thought the punches hit a lil bit harder than BC's and obviously punches and werdplay win battles....nice closer too
bad:structure was off coodve used better vocab...a few lines were whack(3-4)

overall:
opener-tie
closer-DK
vocab-BC
flow-BC
werdplay-DK
punches-DK
multies-DK

overall#2-BC coodve won if his punches hit harder but unfortunately they didnt so the under dawg wins...keep elevating king and same thing to you BC

v/da king

Voted For: Bonecollector

I gotta give it to bonecollector, both had pretty tite verses but i was feeling his a little more. Try and improve on a concepts and structures a bit man coz atm their both wack in da sense..................

Voted For: Da King

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^^vote

Ight,both of y'all were too simple.Flow didn't play a factor here as it was the same on both sides(needs inprovement).But punches were weak.I don't recall seing any quality wordplay or methaphors.But at least Da King had personals even they it was weak.

Vote-Da King

This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
 

checking the polls.................................

Voted For: Bonecollector

Wow this Was a Str8 Merkin

BC
Aii basically Mayne you drop one of the nicest verses ive seen on RV in a while everybody droppin so wack like ...O NVMD lol but yeah you connected with the majority of your pucnhez but some of them were jus like ....... a punch nuttin connecting really hard but connecting far as personals go I didnt see any but with those punchez who needs Em.....multis were aii I seen alot in the begining so that made it very interesting .... so basically you won this battle and i think you knew it so .....not much to Xplain here ....

Da King
Aii mayne stuff like:
ya raps is tired, watch me melt ya dome
set dis *man on fire den send him to *collect his bones

Is played mayne and that made your verse look very Tired NO HATE but it was jus like not clickin it was like you were jus making threats instead of punchez so i wasnt feelin that your lines were shortened and alot of stuff was wrong so Id rather not get into detail or you'd think that i was hating or somethin like that /....... so .....

Please RTF in Either link in my sig PLEASE!!!

.....................Uppin ill return the votes tomorrow morning

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Voted For: Da King

ur shit is hot man u did that man every thing u did was nice