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"No We Won'"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/limitededitioncan.htm
Soundclick isn't workin for me right now...I can't play anyone's shit...I will give links when it works for me. |
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fucking soundclick i fucking hate fucking soudnclick21!
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came to leave feedback but soundclick is till down. PM me with a reminder when that mofo comes back up.
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It's back up....
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Peepin... Good emotion on this track, flow is a bit forced. Lyrics are good too, but flow needs some polishin. I would seriously just take about 10 more takes even if you nail a verse just so you become comfortable on the beat. Hook is better as far as that goes, man I'm feelin this beat though. Good track, your flow still needs work, but you hella elevated from the last track i peeped - keep droppin. 1
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Uppin' for some more feed...fuck this has been slept on...
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Listening through my stock G4 speaker.
Beat is pretty nice. First verse - needs a new mic. flow was pretty on, some rush spots, but deliv got monotone by the time the first verse was over. Then the same deliv on the hook. The hook was pretty nice. At some point it goes WAY off beat. Seems liek a paste prob though since it's consistantly too fast for the beat for everything for everything but the last two lines. Second verse's feed is identical to the first. Think with a new mic your mic presense would definitely come up because thee's some characteristic in your voice that your mic's like "nah, fuck em. I ain't doing that". You remind me a little bit of a young 7/3rd. Should have doubled another layer or two of adlibs on the hook. Last Hook finishes way off beat again. Would have been a pretty solid track if not for thouse rough spots. |
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