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Hate it Or Love it (Weerd.....) :cool:
yea, for audio track i'm doin' on Hate it or love it beat. fashos...
(chorusx2) :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:Hate it or love it, the underdogs on top And I'm gon shine, homie, until my heart stop Go 'head envy me, I'm raps MVP And I ain't goin' nowhere so you can get to kno me 16 years old, man, and I spit it on the dot Tryin' to take this rap weight, straight hit it to the top Shit I won't stop, when these dicks wanna pop Got this shit on lock, ain't no bitch wit a glock Everyone against me, man, it's me against the world Time to take all this hating, that's immense, for a twirl Gold, silver on my neck, reppin' faith and pride If you got a problem wit me, man, say it don't hide But they gon ride,fly poppin' wit the mouth They be boppin' it about, so I be knockin' fools out Shinin' jewels out, thinkin' people be afraid But that shit can make yo known home, equal to yo grave Gotta play it safe, or yo girl be mimin' rape They might even go for you, take your body lined in tape Never actin' fake, man, and keep yo own friends Or jus like Biggie and Pac, you gon end (chorusx2) Hate it or love it, the underdogs on top And I'm gon shine, homie, until my heart stop Go 'head envy me, I'm raps MVP And I ain't goin' nowhere so you can get to kno me No matter what people say, man, I keep my steam flowin' Got the snooze button on, man, I keep my dream goin' Bright gleam glowin', nothin' ever keeps me down Got a gun, who cares, even if I see the round Try to beat me down, guarantee you'll end up dirty You be bruised black and blue, like Duke road jersey Do this shit for thirty more years, that's how I feel Depression and pain I yield, but wit rap, now I heal But people tryin' to steal, my joy, like known thugs Funny how my biggest haters all share my own blood But I jus shrug, and rub, the bug away Man, I ain't feelin' no love, I might as well jus run away But if I don't stay, throwin' education out End up in the streets where homies sprayin' all about Layin' bodies out, shit, man, I'm done here Whether you hate it or love it, yo, I'm out in one year (chorusx2) Hate it or love it, the underdogs on top And I'm gon shine, homie, until my heart stop Go 'head envy me, I'm raps MVP And I ain't goin' nowhere so you can get to kno me |
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pretty good shit...cant wait to hear it in audio........
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I can't wait neither, or either, w/e yo. :D :cool: :shoot:
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hmmmmmmmmm...it flows nice but your not really saying nothing u mention a few topics but don't really stick wit one...its more of a brag track but its got no punchlines....u shoulda threw a few good punches in there if u was gon brag...vocab is real basic...pop, stop, top...this are ya rhyming words man...u should up those slightly an make them multie syllabe rhymes it would flow iller an be unique from what game & 50 did....cuz as is now its basically gonna flow liek original track an jus be in your voice...u wanna own the beat an out-do the original so a rewrite would prolly make this way iller.
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basically what Triple n said...but I kinda liked this though...audio this shit...can't wait lol..rtf on my battle....
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Hmm...You probably should've just waited until you recorded it to post it...I really don't see why you did this...But anyways, it was iight man...I know it'll be fire on the mic, so let me know when you got that up homie...1
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I liked this a lot better then your other song, the pop it or wt/v this was hot, good shit, hook was better then the other chorus on your old song, this was nice, and I found it more original, not as thuggish ima kill yo ass foo', lol, but I find the 1st verse and 2nd verse kinda were a different topic iunno, but still nice, 8.5/10 rtf on my next open mic, song lyrics, keep an eye out
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^yup appreciate it. And yo pop it was like from last yr. lmao but props
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