lyrical mage vs BkBrawla
 

Battle Rules:

10 -unlimited :thefinger
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-16-05 at 02:01 PM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 12:33 PM.

BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-16-05 12:36 PM.

man i cant just take the fact
its been a couple of months and this bitch is back
your whack thats why you left rv in the first place
been 5 or 6 months and the bitch finally shows his face
what a disgrace i gave you 90 minutes of time
so you have a good verse of whack/repeated lines
youll only be good if you battle whack noobs son
last time you battled whack vets yo record:0-21
this mostly goes to him but to the rest of you
dont leave and come back like this bitch did to
and if i hear you left and came back wit a new name
i will personally make sure yo ass stay in shame.

to explain
he was a whack mc who came back to rv
plus he had a whack record
no hating but i hate that shit

*If you loook at this "profile" he got ssd is where he from
* His Custom rapper is big pun
* His custom rapper record is -1

This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
 

This kid is a newbie no way his punches can be "big puns"*
Kid i'm solor eclipsing this bitch, blocking your sun (hotness)
^last line is self-glorification but first one is dope

If you watched 10,000 porno tapes still your punches won't be r-rated
Cause your punches are just old and played, like jokes been out-dated
^nice nice

Change "ssd" to "std" but still your punches will be pack with disease*
You cant see me....Even if i was a "pussy" you still can't beat me
^hehe, funny bar

I'm turning this bitch into usher, leaving his rhymes "burn"
Is that a white mustahe?.......No your wrong thats a men sperm
^lmao...good...
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If this kid smoke pot and tooked viagra, still his punches won't be stiff joints
Like your dick with my cold punches, never your punches will be on point
^good bar

Your raps stink so horrible, and disgusting, they even making the onions cry.
Your skillz percentage is just like your custom rapper, -1, kid please die*
^hehe, nice one

I liked your verse, had nice creative punches and some good personals in there. Only thing that bothered me was the times you used "punches", damn lemme count that...6 times you used the word punches rofl...That was the only thing that irritated me off a bit. Otherwise, you had your flow on lock, good balance in your vocab and punches/personals were funny so I think you definitely took this one. Good going fam!

My record was never 0-21 wtf?................................

This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
 

this shit was prtty sick famz...good punches and i was feelin the personals....lol....i think one line had me laugh...real good structure and good flow. this shit was dope overall i rate it 7.5/10

Uppin for some damn votes...............................

This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
 

aight my Burger King boy killed this battle easily............

his structure and flow was top.....lyrical mage had that goin to..........but seriously bk took it with harder punches and more witty ways of dissin his opponent...that std shit was funny!!! one point to make is that some of ya lines cud be worded better, they dope already but if they were worded better then ya wud be on fire!!!

Voted For: BkBrawla

This verse was the better of the two.
Both of you never explain your punches again, or I will kill you.

Bitch...........................that'll be removed should be a feedback

uppin on this shit my peoples a battle never to be missed

Uppin............................................. ....................................

This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
 

lmfao dat shit was wakk like everi line u said sum shit bout punches nigga dats trash