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N-Demik 08-04-02 12:00 PM

Week 7: Topical Open Mic Winner
 
LMAO..This Week Was Pretty Pathetic..

But This Weeks Overall Winner Is Johnny 6-Feet

Heres His Verse:-

picture this day, it started as normal, nothing spectacular/
i flipped on the morning news, no new diseases, no chainsaw massacre/
drove myself to work at about 9pm/
didnt know that bad karma was 'bout to be landing-in/
it wasnt even late when i felt something like an earthquake/
the place shaked, i thought of feeling about a second too late/
i stared in horror at the building next to us, the twin of my work place/
the smoke pouring from the building like bad weed in a cigar-case/
my eyes bugged out, looked as big as plates and i ran fast/
i just about made it to the doorway when i felt the second crash/
about 4 floors above-me, plus up there my girl who loved-me/
didnt have time to grief, i was hopping stairways, fast as i could-be/
made it to the ground floor, the earth rumbled once more/
realised the building was collapsing as a hurled through the door/
kept running, didnt even stop to brush off the dirt and plaster/
my brain was too numb then to realise the size of this disaster/
a piece of glass struck my shoulder, bowling me over/
bleeding, limping, as the buildings fell i just about got to cover/
about the time my heart stopped was the time i assumed-it/
that this thoughtless terrorism had ledt me and my girl fatally-wounded/

Runner Up: Onslaught

-Due To Lack Of Interest Tha T.O.M Will Be Put On Hiatus-

OFF~CeNTeR 08-05-02 01:52 PM

*sighs*

I liked mine...


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