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Da NFamous 08-04-02 12:38 PM

Elevated Keystyle
 
this cats brains is banannas crazyotic illness oozin from my ear//
rappin from the dome about the street to get my thoughts clear//
spittin with sicknostic sicles of siesmic forced shit saving space//
over emphasizing evil in my rhymes energizingly emancipating black race//
havin fine females fingerin frank feelin and fixating him with complaisance//
my knowledge extends from the present to when the first nigga was nascent//
complectic afrocentric my mind is erattic and ever so hectic//
convected skulls with a the force of lifes circle but my rhmes eccentric//
twip n flippin quickly dippin in hoes the way i have the legs spread on the bird//
deading what ya heard and butter knifin the dictionary spreadin the word//
life grave beyond street zombies slouchin pocketing drug money//
put slugs in crummy bums funny walkin with whiskey coatin their tongue see//
acidic foot steps trail behind radioactivly on the paved walk//
retracting and batterin oppositions chins slittin cotton speakin slave talk//
spyin not snitchin on gangs writin and spittin in slang//
me droppin a mic is not to happen like dracula spiittin his fang//
just knockin out a key for rap utopia spinnin your slow mind//
why i had one bar stumps even me cause u were lost with the first line//
1luv.

NinoScar 08-04-02 02:21 PM

i like this topic and the rhymes where straight, but the vocab is kinda "complex" for the topic, i rap and speak slang so i wouldnt know nothin' bout that... alot of peeps in here like that though so i guess its ight...

Da NFamous 08-04-02 04:08 PM

thanks, yeh i drop complexity cause i try to make my shit so deep and complex that i confuse myself, this was kinda light for me but yeh i try to stay complex, thanks for the props though, 1luv.

Rawdeadly 08-05-02 01:22 AM

Shit needs work....ALOT OF IT.....

work on it


Peace.....
1...........


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